I love the story and it is very well written, hmmm - but I see you are making this into a threesome...this is only my opinion and it is meant not to be of no offense to you. I dislilke threesomes or foursomes or any story with just the one pairing S/K. As much as I like Kasai too bad it had to be him to impregnant Kagome. I know there is no jealousies between the three and they work seem to work well together.
I love the way Kagura and Kikyo were handled by Sessho and Kasai for hurting Kagome...Sango should have been there too so that she could get her sorry ass handled too.
Anyway I agree with reviewer Mona about Kikyo and Inuyasha's situation. I think that is the way to go for them...LOL.
This is your story and you write it anyway that pleases you. I will continue to read it because it is enjoyable to read.
This chapter was well written and looking forward to future updates.
Mona (Chapter 11) - Fri 18 Aug 2017
I hope because of Kikyo's action Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's parents object her mating and marriage to Inuyasha, so she longer will be able to be part of the family/pack. And if Inuyasha decides to overlook their decree he will be banished or stripped of his title/place in the pack.
Haven (Chapter 10) - Wed 16 Aug 2017
Just finished reading it. And I love it, I hope you update soon!
Awesome update! Can't wait for more!
i had a feeling kagome might be pregnant? intresting turn i need to see how this will turn out will she be giving birth uring the winter session when school is closed? who will know? so many questions great story so far looking foward to reading more.
Anonymous (Chapter 7) - Sun 02 Jul 2017
I hope she's pregant I want her to mate sesshomaru and have a full demon child for kasai it will make sesshomaru accept his feelings earlier than him going through dinal
Dani (Chapter 7) - Thu 29 Jun 2017
Loving the story and happy to see where it goes, sad she has to sleep with her friend because of some idiots. Excited for more of this story :)
Keep posting pleaseee!!!
Mo (Chapter 6) - Wed 28 Jun 2017
I'm not sure if Kasai is with Kagome because of the rumors about her being promiscuous or because he is genuinely interested in her. Basically idk if he's a good or bad guy. I'm especially confused because of that look Kagome said he had.
Natalia (Chapter 6) - Wed 28 Jun 2017
i loved the chapter! thx for updating. just a plea, please use commas when needed if it's not a bother, maybe read aloud so you will understand where they are needed. my tutor in creative writing class always advises us to do that, read your own work aloud! lol it helps me! English isn't my first language so sometimes it is hard for me to understand the sense, without commas and i have to read two or three times. thx for understanding! i enjoy the plot and the pace and agree with smelling innocence thing!
will eagerly wait for more, please don't take my words as bad ok? thx!
Loved the chapter about time Kagome makes a friend. At this point I can't tell if he has something to gain but I think he wants to help Kagome but also wants her to trust him. LIke they say keep your enemies closer.
Dani (Chapter 5) - Sun 04 Jun 2017
Loving this story, keep them coming :) I wanna see how it all plays out :)
HA! She told him lol very nice. Im curious to see how their relationship unfolds. And i'm suspicious of the fire demon *squints eyes* Thank you for sharing!
Love this story I can't wait for an update
I really like reading both of your stories. They are fascinating. This chapter of SoL is a bit humerous and entertaining. I just never could understand why people bully others. I feel like they are just jealous, envious and mean spirited because it fuels their need to be a big shot and whatever else that rolls around their pea brains. I have zero tolerance for bullies. I know the feeling personaly from when I was in elementary school.
I hope that when all those idiots find out the truth about Kagome's life, they will feel like the maggots that they really are and that if any of them try to ask for forgiveness from her that she not give it and walk away from them. They don't need her kindness towards them but Kagome being who she is probably would give it anyway. I hope Kagome doesn't get her heart broken by Kasai and has a great time with him.
Keep your stories going and don't give up on them. I look forward to reading future updates and you are doing a geat job!
Wouldn't the demons be able to scent the fact that she is not having sex? I'm confused
Wouldn't the demons be able to scent the fact that she is not having sex? I'm confused
Mona (Chapter 5) - Wed 24 May 2017
If they are suppose to be demon, shouldn't they be able to smell her innocence.
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