| The story is great! Please update, quickly, i can't wait!
| that is a shame with whats happenong in sudan, darfur..but i have enjoyed your story so far so please continue this soon
Demonic kunoichiKagi (Chapter 2) - Thu 03 Jul 2008
| Very nicely written. Update.
Musouka (Chapter 1) - Mon 30 Jun 2008
| So I Like This Rewritten Chapter Better Than The Other One ... It's More Thought Out And More Realistic ... Can't Wait To Read More!
Demonic kunoichiKagi (Chapter 1) - Sun 29 Jun 2008
| This is better. Great job!!!
Update soon.
Kagome357 (Chapter 1) - Fri 27 Jun 2008
| Review whoring is against the TOS.
Demonic kunoichiKagi (Chapter 1) - Fri 27 Jun 2008
| i think that you rushed it just a bit. I mean at the beginning Kagome was protrayed like she didn't know that Inu was cheating on and as soon as they reached the school she's like all calm and breaking up with him because she knew of his betrayal. And the whole think with Sesshoumaru is a bit fast and rushed as well...BUT i loved the way you made Kagura a total bitch. Kagome should have punched her right in the eye.
Overall it's a good story you might wanna slow things down a bit, don't want ya getting flamed by some insensitive jerk.
Hope you update soon though...
-Kagi-chan-
| It was an okay story but like Demonic kunoichiKagi said it was a bit rushed, that and if you used a little bit more detail it could help the story progress in a better pace....Keep working at it:)
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