Interesting! I'm intrigued on how this will play out. 

I thought it was a good summary and it totally made me want to read it. Kinda sad that the first chapter was short. But looking forward to the many more to come

ja ne till next time and keep up the good work

I must say I am found of darkfics so I am all for it, really amazing Prologue so far!! it tells you what you are about to read and gives you the insite on what is to come if it is scary dark, or troublesome, intresting!!! I can't wait to read more.

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megan007

Hello, your story is great! But you should take it off before a mod or admin finds it. Since it is a chapter story it must be at least 700 words, I don't want you to get in trouble especially not on your first day, so I advise you to remove it until it's at least 700 words.

~Lady Midnight

I like it! Please write more soon! And I do hope that your next chapter is longer!