I can picture Sesshy getting a chill down his spine as he hears both Kagome and his mother laughing loud enough for any youkai to hear XD
I read it all in one go!!! victoryyyy... sleep. sllleeeeep. lol
Despite my natural desire to pass the heck out... I just couldn't. Your drabbles were so much fun XD and it has plot. I love drabbles with plot. ^_________^ grammar was good, spelling good, characters weren't horribly ooc, which is impressive. for the life of me I can't write a character with sesshy's personality. I always screw it up with a funny or a... or something. it just never works. so kudos. erm. like i said, plot is goood. pace is good. word choice is good. nothing too fancy, but I didn't find myself annoyed by plain word usage.
I likey. Hope you aren't working yourself to death and looking forward to updates. lots and lots of updates =]
~Zero
I've been reading this story update by update for so long. I've finally gotten onto my computer to review; well, now that I've gotten it back from the manufacturer. I'm in love with it. I enjoy reading Sesshoumaru and Kagome's interactions so much. The look into Airi's feelings and the unnoticed detail of the unusually easy acceptance of Kagome's odd origins and mannerisms was such a revelation; something I’ve never even contemplated. Well, not since the episode/chapter where they thought of Kagome as a witch of kitsune because of her clothing and hanging with Inuyasha, towards the beginning of the series. I’m clinging to your feet trying to get you to get me to the end, but the ride is enjoyable despite my innate impatience. I can’t wait to see more of Sesshoumaru’s mother.
Side note: It should say, “more importantly, she could breathe*”. It's easier to write it when you think of how you say it. When you said "you can't breathe" there's a distinct emphasis on the "e".
-KD
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