I am so glad to see that this story has begun again. The chapters you added on to it was nicely written. Please do continue to the end of this fascinating story. Please don't leave us hangin for such a long time. I never know if the author intends to finish it or just drop it altogether.
There were a few minor grammar and spelling errors but nothing that I would nit pick over. It did not take away from the story. Question: Did Sesshomaru keep in touch with Kagome's mother while Kagome was gone because mama Higurashi did not seem too surprise of Kagome's story and obviously he must have told her everything for why else would she call him when Kagome came back?
Great chapters and looking forward to more chapters soon.
So happy to read a new chapter. I hope you continue with the story and that your muse helps you along. I know this is going to be a great story. If you want help or any ideas, I'll be happy to help. Wonder what sesshomaru is going to tell kagome and how she's going to take it. Is Inuyasha going to sense or smell sesshomaru in kagome's time?
Can't wait for the next chapter.
Update soon onegai
Ja ne
Absolutely love this story so far and very excited to see what you do with it! You have a great concept and I thoroughly enjoy the portrayal of the characters. You have a few minor spelling mistakes but this is easily fixed - keep writing, I think you have a winner on your hands!
Zelda (Chapter 6) - Thu 23 Feb 2017
Ive been looking for a story like this, thank you so much continuing! I look forward to the next chapter. Woo!
Natalia (Chapter 6) - Wed 22 Feb 2017
Yay welcome back! Thx for updating! It's refreshing and good fic! I like it and hope to read more soon! Good luck!
Toni (Chapter 6) - Wed 22 Feb 2017
just read all the chapters keep going I really like the story
I think your story is interesting. I look forward to seeing it develop more.
Fair Oma (Chapter 5) - Thu 23 Jun 2011
sweetie if i had started reading this when it first came out i would have been reviewing each time THIS IS GREAT i just can't wait until the next chapter. and i will tell u this i have just begin to whine about faster updates. :) keep up the great work
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