I like the story but to be honest I am disappointed too. I wanted Kagome to inflict some serious pain on Kikyo. But there was no confrontation. 

So much more could have been done with this. This is really almost like a outline for a story. There are small things that could be added in, all in all it was decent. Some grammar and spelling here and there, and some parts which were painful to read just because of how blunt they came across but overall not bad. I wonder, if you ever considered turning it into a chapter story?

I liked your story. I thought it wrapped things up very well and I liked the way you told us the date each time, like a progression. I thought it was good the way Kagome zapped Naraku because initially she seemed way too cosy with him. I liked the outcomes.

Sweetttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt, a gorgeously told story.

i like that! i like that a lot! yEy!!!!