Does Naraku have something up his sleeve dealing with Kagome seeing Sesshoumaru and rejecting him. *gasp* beyond the chloroform does he plan on drugging her some more? What's gonna happen? Ooh and I hope Sarah has to go before like demon court or something and gets punished severely, maybe torn apart and eaten or maybe under an bound spell to make her work as a servant for some powerful ugly demon for the rest of her life hahahahaha . No point in wishing Naraku to get something similar since Sesshoumaru will probably get ahold of him first.
Great fanfic I Hope to see more in the future. I'm working on my fanfic for one of fanfic, but it a comfort/hurt/romance which is my first time in doing this sort of genre fanfic. Though, I still got to finish my other ones which I get to my other fanfic later. There will be some suprising twists, and everything. But I won't be using a beta which they take to long and will have to get it fixed later.
Anyway, once again good fanfic. Can't wait to see the next chapter.
Fan of Smortz (Chapter 42) - Thu 30 Jun 2011
Yay update! (Does the Happy Dance).
I hate Sarah! She is so going down for this! I jus hope that both, she & Naraku will suffer a great deal in the end! Anything else would be merciful & they don't deserve it! Me no liking the way things are going right now, so plz update soon again with some good news!
Miss.Undo (Chapter 42) - Thu 30 Jun 2011
Okay so now all hell is going tobreak lose when Sesshomaru finds out. Well I can't wait for that update!
Let me at her! That bitch is psychotic?! Oh my goodness, I didn't know she was related to Kathy Bates character in Misery. The hell Naraku's a dark night, he's the creep on the corner always trying to grope passing girls, that's who he is. Sesshomaru's gonna kill all of them, forget lost love she'll be shredded meat once he finds out what she did becasue i don't think there's a way in the universe he'd go back to her, probably start turning into a hermit. Loved this chapter, just my type of drama, something that pisses me off but excited to see what happens next, lol.
Way to go girl! I love that you have the "balls" to stick to Kagome's sweet and innocent personality because in all reality, not everyone is a badass! I really believe that she would truely help Sarah, despite her being an evil tramp, because Kagome is the kind of girl that wants to see the good in people and hopes that people can turn things around and change themselves for the better. Thanks for not writing the same old rubbish where Kagome magically turns into a super, badas,s take-no-prisoners kind of girl and keeping it real! Not everyone is a bitter, cynical, pessimist after someone has wronged them. Some people can actually forgive and forget and Kagome is one of those people.
Grrr... Sesshomaru's not going to take what they did very well. He might lose his temper. That'll be fun, won't it? Or Kagome will purify the hell out of Naraku. Mwahahaha! ha...
Great chaper, as usual. :) You are a great writer
Anna (Chapter 42) - Thu 30 Jun 2011
This is the dumbest shit I've ever hear. She doesn't want anyone to overhear her conversation? Jesus, that's like a someone being like "little girl, can you please help me find my puppy inside my white van...?"
Kagome Is A FOOL. *Sighs, head falling sharply on desk with a thunk* Doesn't want anyone to hear so they're going to a Coffee House, where there are MORE to hear? *shakes head* Stupid, not thinking. I can forgive her for wanting to believe the best of Sarah despite what she's learned and seen, but to be so utterly illogical? Foolish. The prospect of two hearing verses unknown numbers really is counter to the reason Sarah gave. I'm being harsh, but in this case Kagome Deserves to have been kidnapped. Especially after all that has transpired.
For Sesshomaru's sake, I hope he Does get to play the white knight for her. Right now I'm too mad at Kagome to have any sympathy for her. But I'm Always biased towards Sesshomaru's happiness.
Thanks for writing.
Ok, I know Kagome is this innocent little thing but damn...that was utterly stupid to believe someone like that when you've been told more than once what she was like. I hate to say it, but she deserves this one.
Ooohhh, this one was the sweetest yet, though i can't find out how my brain is processing it that way. Anywho, getting frustrated with Sesshomaru, just show her already! She's not going to run, she is defintely not that pathetic bitch Sarah. Come on Sesshomaru, she might give you some nookie, lol! That would probably attract more of his inner perv demons attention than his. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Miss.Undo (Chapter 41) - Tue 28 Jun 2011
Thats mean he's such a dick at times. I hope that next chapter wont be bad. Please update soon.
Blaire (Chapter 41) - Tue 28 Jun 2011
Next chapter!!! Hurry I want to see Sesshomaru beg! lol
Smortz Fan (Chapter 41) - Tue 28 Jun 2011
Heep, Heep, Hoorray! Another update yay! -Shakes pom poms in the air, jumps up and down and kicks high... CRUNCH!... Ooohhh! My back!... (... wobles back to the rocking chair)-
Thank you for updating! I'm glad that Sesshomaru's beast is out! She needs to meet both sides and show him that she is not afraid, no matter what! I don't know why, but I liked Kagome better when she was willing to be with him either as a mistress or as anything else. I know she deserves more and hope she gets the whole package and not just the "mistress" title, but now that she realizes that she loves him, she seems like she wants him to ask her to be something more important. I think that when you love someone so much, it makes no difference if you are at the top of the list as the most important person, or at the very bottom, just as long as you are near is all that matters! But she seems to think that now because she loves him, he HAS to see her as someone more important than just a mere mistress. Yes, she should strive for a better position than just a mistress, yes, she needs to have self respect, yes, she deserves a lot more, and yes, nothing is better than the whole faerie tale, but all I am saying is that last time we saw her, she didn't care at all, all that mattered was that she would be near him,and now she wants him to tell her that he sees her as more! She can't go doing that to him, because he is still too afraid and that may just spook him away. (Just my point of view) Please update soon again! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Fan of Smortz (Chapter 40) - Mon 27 Jun 2011
You are an evil, evil woman! That chapter had me taunt like a bow ready togo off! HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I just found your story and read every single chapter from beginning to end, and it's a wonderful story! I can't believe I didn't discovered it any sooner! Congratulations on your new car and new job, hope everything works great for you! Please, update soon again!
janjan (Chapter 40) - Sun 26 Jun 2011
AWEsome!!!!!! I wonder what naruku and sarah have planned! yay!!! finally showed his true self cant wait for the reaction of when he shows her his dog from!
so excited! keep goin!
janjan (Chapter 40) - Sun 26 Jun 2011
AWEsome!!!!!! I wonder what naruku and sarah have planned! yay!!! finally showed his true self cant wait for the reaction of when he shows her his dog from!
so excited! keep goin!
Yes, thank you. FINALLY!!! Whoohooo!!!! Sad that the gossiping group didn't hear about him never marrying Sarah. *sigh* I suppose Kagome will have a bit of a fight on her hands until Sessy-boy straightens up and takes her for a wife, of course, after having shown her his beastial side. I am quite delighted at Kag and Sess's progress. I thought they'd dance around each other forever. why is it important that he catch the "fiance" better known as worthless gold digging whore and Naraku together again? Was it so he could legitimately fight Naraku? *sigh* I'm in heaven, floating on big fluffy, sesshy shaped clouds after reading this. i was disappointed that I had to wait another day because i couldn't be home as I wanted but all is well now. :) now for pizza and doughnuts to cement this great day.
--Kaminoko (c)2011
Miss.UNDO (Chapter 40) - Sun 26 Jun 2011
Yay thats it you made my day. Please hook it up with another update! Its getting steamy!
LOL! like it would fall off from blue balls! I agree with Sesshomaru, won't be that easy, took 25 chapters to find one kid and kill the thunder brothers, don't think it's going to be that quick with Naraku really involved this time. Damn but i'm in the same camp as him too, i want them to get down to it, he''s not the only one getting teased with this, haha. Loved both of these chapters, I pray Sarah gets uglier and Naraku gets what he deserves soon.
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