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Luna (Chapter 3) - Sun 01 May 2011

awesome possum!


jaimesesshy (Chapter 3) - Sun 01 May 2011

This story is incredible! You capture all of the raw emotions so well! Even from the slightly less emotional being like Sesshomaru.  Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens next!


Fallen0x (Chapter 3) - Sun 01 May 2011

Hi! I understand what you mean by experimental fics being shorter at first. I'm working on chapter 1 of my new fic and it was pretty short at first. i keep adding stuff to it though as I proofread lol :) I'm super excited to post it! lol Sorry, I got too excited! anyway, i think this story is great and i like how you are focusing on emotion. poor Kagome! I feel like she always gets the short end of the stick at first! can't wait to read more! ja ne! :)


Brittany (Chapter 2) - Sat 30 Apr 2011

This story is crazy! It's a good crazy. I was jumped when I was 17 and was beaten up, they did not get as far as they did with Kagome because I fought back and my friend saved me. I know what it feels like to be in a situation and feel as if that you have no control. I can only hope that you continue to write the story and be as true as you can.

I look forward to your update.


silverchan89 (Chapter 2) - Thu 21 Apr 2011

I sat here speechless for a long time. Trying to think of what to say to this. You gave a warning that this was graphic but i still read it not quite believeing the warning. I had to skip most of the rape scene, it hurt to read. I'm not sure what to think right now but i commend you for posting this story without shame. I'm horrified and somehow glad that you did. I guess humans are disgusting creatures because i read all the way to chapter two and i have to know what happens. I have to know if she can move forward with her life because you most certainly never recover from something like that, not completely at least. that is going to be a lingering nightmare and cause for plenty of mental issues for the rest of her life. there is no jumping in a well, traveling through time, to fix what has happened.

I look forward to seeing how your story develops and good luck to you.


amy (Chapter 2) - Tue 19 Apr 2011

Great fic, unfortunately sad but she will be taken care of by seshy based on honor!


Ashley (Chapter 2) - Tue 19 Apr 2011

This is a good story. As someone who has been in a situation like this before, I have to say that for the most part you are right on target. It made me cry because I know what that feels like unfortunantly. Keep up the good work:)

Update Soon.

-Ashleysama


Jihadi (Chapter 2) - Sat 16 Apr 2011

This is good!  It's interesting, and I enjoy seeing someone who is actually making Kagome break down when something like this happens to her, instead of her being all fine and dandy a few chapters later.  I've read enough to know that it doesn't work that way.  

I like your take on Sesshoumaru; he doesn't actually like her, but he feels honor bound to help her.  That sounds about right at this point.  He doesn't know her, and definitely hasn't been pining after her secretly for years.  That, along with Rin's help, is probably what she needs right now.

Thank you also for writing a logical reason for why InuYasha wasn't there that doesn't involve Kikyou.  His situation inspires sympathy, but one can't help but agree with Sesshoumaru's last statement:  If he loved Kagome, he shouldn't have mated another.  I look forward to see how that mess escalates, and how Hana deals with Kagome's presence and vice versa.

Keep it up!  I want to see another chapter!


Fallen0x (Chapter 2) - Sat 16 Apr 2011

Hi! I'm interested as to how your story is going to play out! I think it's good so far! I didn't read the beginning of chapter one because I didn't think I could handle it exactly.. This story kind of makes me sad, but I'm also curious about it! I look foward to reading more! Ja ne!


sara (Chapter 2) - Sat 16 Apr 2011

I think you are pretty realistic with how Kagome feels. What I don´t understand is how Inuyasha didn´t wait for her to return and mated so soon another because she is hanyou like him. Poor Kagome, again second best to another even if he loves her. Stupid Inuyasha, I bet he would have waited had it been Kikyou he waited for. Somehow he always does everything wrong when it comes to Kagome.

I think your portrayal of Sesshoumaru here is also fitting. It´s not that he suddenly likes her but he is merciful. He already showed that he is merciful even before Kagome went home. After all he was the one who saved her at least twice when he had no obligation to her at all. He is not really nice but he is definitely not evil either.


Luna (Chapter 2) - Fri 15 Apr 2011

I heart you for updating!


SmilingFool (Chapter 2) - Fri 15 Apr 2011

That was a great chapter, I have to say you do have some of the feelings correct and all I can say that once raped it changes who you are and who and how you trust others in the end some come out strong others' not.  I know the trials and nightmares will continue for some time however, I do hope you make Kagome a survivor.  I love the tongue bashing Sesshomaru gave Inu.  I wonder how the others' will take the news....  Update soon....


roo86 (Chapter 2) - Fri 15 Apr 2011

NO!!!!! Please on't be iffy on this!  I love this story, while it is indeed sad it is expertly written.

You have a gift use it.  Thanks.


TruGemini (Chapter 2) - Fri 15 Apr 2011

This was good....really, really good. Gosh I went from wanting toc ry to wanting to fight to feeling pity all in one chapter. This was awesome. Please keep up the great work!


lara (Chapter 2) - Fri 15 Apr 2011

This was the hardest thing I've ever read & I cried through the entire thing.

It was a nightmare.


nykita (Chapter 1) - Fri 15 Apr 2011

nice writing style you have there though I didn't read too much of the first chapter. I'm one of the rare people who dont enjoy reading about gang rape.


Thatz (Chapter 1) - Thu 07 Apr 2011

i love it what happens next!!!!

keep going what happens next!!


Luna (Chapter 1) - Wed 06 Apr 2011

awesome prologue, poor Kagome!

I hope you add another chapter soon!


lauren (Chapter 1) - Wed 06 Apr 2011

i love a good darkfic.


snowbird (Chapter 1) - Tue 05 Apr 2011

I have a feeling this story is going to be heavy in the emotion department.  She's going to have a long, hard road ahead of her before she can be as normal as possible after this.  I think that Sesshoumaru, in his own way, will be a strong pillar of support for her.

I plan to stick with this story and follow along as you attempt to heal Kagome.  Your imagination will have its hands full.


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