Lovely descriptions... Very livid... Guess this is a good thing, after all...^^"
It is soooo dark and gross!!!
Poor Syn, you got yourself a new addict. XD
Hedda (Chapter 4) - Sat 02 Apr 2011
The plot thickens... I am so curious how you will proceed.
Hedda (Chapter 3) - Sat 02 Apr 2011
What I love about this story is that is dark and that you make Kagome's father part of her life. Most stories seem to be void of him (which is also believable), but it is nice for a chance to have him in there. It just enriches your story and my reading stuff. :)
Hedda (Chapter 2) - Sat 02 Apr 2011
OMG!!! So hot... And Sesshomaru being not his usual clean, pure and almighty self just adds up to it.....
Hedda (Chapter 1) - Sat 02 Apr 2011
I love the premise. So dark and wild... =)
I love this idea!! Can't wait to see what it develops into!
Anon (Chapter 6) - Mon 14 Mar 2011
Interesting plot line. You don't see many post apocolyptic fanfictions around. I like it :) plz keep up the good work
anonymous3.0 (Chapter 6) - Mon 14 Mar 2011
Nice, I'm guessing Repo: The Genetic Opera was your inspiration for this, right? :)
Sprinks (Chapter 5) - Sun 13 Mar 2011
wow, dark and twisted.
I like it :)
The only thing I would say I got confused in was the last chapter because you missed kagome actually leaving the house, and if she did I missed it. lol.
A piece of advise for future chapters, you seem to be rushing a bit, i like how you're chopping the pov's and how they are presented but i think you could go a bit more in depth with description it will go a long way. :D
Keep up the awesome work.
Update Soon :)
Love Sprinks.
love it...very interesting
<3
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