cryyyyy it's been sooooooooooooooo lomg....hopr you'll be able to update again soon
I have read this story, chapter-by-chapter, as it has been posted. I have enjoyed it more than I can say. But I've put your recent absence to good use, re-reading it in only a couple of sittings. It was even more wonderful this way! The story is so well-plotted, the dialogue believable, and the characters portrayed so true to the originals. Your writing is of such high quality, it is a true delight to read.
martha (Chapter 331) - Wed 26 Sep 2012
I love this series been following on both fanfiction and here. Can't wait to see what you have happen next. Thanks for sharing your great work.
Hey there!!
I'm sure you get this a lot but well done on your story! It's very well written and so entertaining to read! Engaging as well as I have now jut finished reading the whole thing in a day! I love it but one thing has seriously confused me in the last couple of chapters...
Is Kagome about to enter the height of her fertility or her period, because I hope you are aware the two are very different stages of the female cycle... In fact they are complete opposites. The height of fertility in a woman is during ovulation, which is 14 days roughly AFTER a woman's period, her period being the LEAST fertile stage of a woman...
Forgive me if you know all this already but I know of a lot of writers who think that a woman's period is the fertile stage...
Anyway, some clarification would go a long way in solving some confusion for me Thankyou!
Love the story regardless!
~Tigeresssa
Marisela (Chapter 331) - Thu 20 Sep 2012
cannot wait for the rest of the chapters!!!!!!!
Oh this is just too fun and funny! I really love Sesshoumaru's mother. And there are loads of great one-liners. Look forward to reading more.
OMG IF JAKEN GETS HIS OWN BED I GET MY OWN BED XD
Marvelous!
por favorrrrrrrr
actualiza pronto
en verdad necesito
saber en que continuara
esta historia
escribes muy bien
y la historia me llama
pleaseeeeeeee
come back soonnnn
Melly (Chapter 331) - Mon 10 Sep 2012
I love this story so much~!!!!! Awesome characters. You portray Sesshomaru and Kagome really well and Sesshmommy is great! I'm aching to find out what happens next... any chance we can find out soon...? ;-;
I miss my LC fix...
Melinda (Chapter 1) - Thu 06 Sep 2012
I love this story! So romantic, funny and smart. Please do continue soon :)
mkhz (Chapter 331) - Thu 23 Aug 2012
First, I want to say just how much I am enjoying this story. It's very fun, and I love the way you've characterized Sesshoumaru. He is just a great big puppy dog, isn't he?
But as I was looking at the last two chapters, I had a small amount of confusion (after all, I've never seen dogs respond to women during their bleeding time - their ovulation, yes, their bleeding, no.)
As you probably know, Dotingmom is correct about the cycle human reproductive cycle. (Many younger fanfic writers seem to treat the bleeding part of the cycle as though it were ovulation, which always made me want to bash my head against hard, immovable objects, such as the pavement.) With the terminology you've thrown in for the last part, and considering the timeline of how long she's been there, it has become somewhat confusing. Perhaps a small description lining up the inu terminology to the human reproductive cycle in your author's note would not be amiss.
For now, I eagerly look forward to your next chapter, and more doggy antics.
Aoi-Kaji (Chapter 331) - Wed 22 Aug 2012
please update soon! I cannot stand to wait ;-; you truly torture me, forthy.
Hoho! so he DID flee for mom's help! I would love to know what whent in his head when Kagome dropped that little detail >.< And mommy does seem to know better... I'm looking forward to see how he'll struggle to keep up doing nothing.
And only now do I finally understand what this gathering of all dog clans is really about.
ohoh...i know of two other demons who might be more willing to act upon their instincts once they discover kagome condition XD
haha already see the other bitches "bitching" around because of kagome drawing the attentionen of a few of the most powerful demons X3
and in the inside momma is saying "whom are you convincing pup? myself or you?"
Loveyaa (Chapter 330) - Wed 15 Aug 2012
Hahaha...well Sesshoumaru is in for a rude awakening with that one. I wonder if he will vie and chase, then try to keep. I can see both of them at their wits end while still trying to make an impression. I can't wait to see what happens next and is Sesshoumaru still naked :)
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