fantastic, wonderful, fabulous, i need far many more words to describe that i love it and can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!!!!
Sokai (Chapter 32) - Sun 20 Jul 2008
Fantastic, wonderful, fabulous, and acceleratingly!!! Along with many other words to describe how much i liked it and can't wait to read more!!!!!
Serena (Chapter 32) - Sun 20 Jul 2008
This story is absolutly amazing. I think your fight scenes are very entertaining and well written. I love how you portray Kagome, she's so feisty. I have to admit that chapter 12 is my absolute favorite so far, it's hilarious. Can't wait to read more!
I am so gateful to Elegant Paws for dedicating a chapter of The Art of Tea, to you and recommending this story. I am totally blown away.
Your craftsmanship and creativity have taken a storyline that has been used before and turned it into something fresh and beautiful.
I was totally captivated up until I got to one of the most luscious love scenes I have ever read. The way everything he did so gently and lovingly, replacing every bad, terrifying deed done to her in the past and turned it into something to cherish. I cried like a baby.
The other part of your story that made me sit up and take notice is the tournement. I don't usually like fight scenes. I always lose the action somewhere along the way but with yours, I could see every move in my mind. I could actually follow the fight. Do you personally have experience with martial Arts or swords or some kind of tactical background because you are really good.
I loved the sparring with Koga. I laughed out loud. Sesshomaru's mother is a handful and I particularly liked Gina. You have your characterizations dead on. You have also created fascinating new characters that just don't fill space but have a life of their own.
Sesshomaru's uncle sounds positively diabolical and of course the two conniving generals evil incarnate. Good Job.
Your writing is rich with colors, flavors, scents, emotions and is very professional. You are an exceptional writer and I hope to read more from you soon
Til next time, Deb.
Ah, yes, great chapter indeed! I find your battle scenes are quite allright for someone who doesn't like writing them. Glad the beads are out of the way, if that's not trust, then what is. ^_^
I look forward to the next update. :)
Dewa mata
Sesshoumaru's Lady (Chapter 32) - Sat 19 Jul 2008
This is a great story! I loved the fighting scenes and the fact that she's not wearing the beads anymore. I have to say that I love how you write Kagome as being a strong character and not a simpering ninny. I have read and reviewed your other story, Dancing with Scissors, which is another great story! Please keep up the good work and I can't wait til you update in August on this story!
Kate (Chapter 31) - Mon 14 Jul 2008
Great chapter, i really like the fight. I thought she was going to lose for abit. Ican't wait to see how Sesshoumaru is going to act over her injury. Update soooon please
Amazing chapter, I was worried about Kagome there for a second. Although I'm really curious to see how Sesshomaru is going to react now that she has been injured. I cannot wait until the next chapter. This one kept me at the edge of my seat. Great job =]
omg omg omg! Oooo that had me biting my fingernails ^_^ awesome job my friend, I can't wait for the next chapter; wonderful!
pauly (Chapter 30) - Fri 27 Jun 2008
Hey! great job, I like this story very much and I can´t wait for the next chapter
I love this story and was truly happy to find it here. But I have a little problem... I'm used to grow the characters' size to be able to read, but I can't do it here, part of the text disapears if I try to do so. I think it is the format, as it works with other stories on this site. I'd be really grateful if the problem could be solved, so that I can read it without the threat of a headache. Thank you so much and keep on the good work!!
This story is such a jewel in my day. I'm always googley-eyed at your eloquence, drooling like a student for her history professor. You effortlessly mix intrigue and intimate romance like its autobiographical or something. I love it. This story is a hand-carved chess board of epic proportions.
And *chortle*, I just saw iloveprettysilverhair's comment about the swords. I second that!
i love u that was so good it was so worth the wait. can't wait to read to fright i wanted to know when kagome goes into heat and if she is going to get pup soon?
I'll give you a broken arm!
Loving it. There better be an update soon.
*claps for joy* yay! and update!! i liked this chapter *grins* very good. however, i want to see Naborou or whatever his name is get what's coming to him for trying to fight dirty!! oh, and plz add me to an update list: unavailabletoyu@yahoo.com
plz and thank you!!
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Oooo, darn those naughty demons for conspiring against Kagome! I'm sure she'll show them! Loved the title and the use of different "swords"! HOTNESS! Keep up the great work!
i love this story i can't wait for the each chapter update soon please
Kagome357 (Chapter 29) - Sun 11 May 2008
Now that was an interesting chapter. I'm wondering if they wanted this treaty of Kagome mating Sesshomaru just so they can flush out the humans making the gunpowder to take advantage away from them. Nice...
Kagome357 (Chapter 29) - Fri 09 May 2008
I'm really glad to see this story over here!
Damn enjoyable ride!
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