While the first half of the chapter had me laughing, you do their playful bantering so well, I have to compliment the second half even more. Pq, this was one of the best action scenes I have ever read. Your descriptions allowed me to picture it all so clearly, and then the emotions embedded had me gritting my teeth. I am on the edge of my seat...
| oh no! I hope that Sesshoumaru's dad doesn't die... i really like him... Another great chapter that was well written... I look forward to your next update. take care!
Blue Luna (Chapter 39) - Fri 08 May 2009
| OMFG Freaking good writing, It took me 2 full days to finish from start to the last chap you have writen and I think I am in ove with the story.
The story is just wonderfully written the words are so powerful and so vivid in ones mind, I just love it... all of it especially the fight scenes and I must say that the whole scene with sessh whipping kags, I know its long past but I must say it was thriling and moving to read that scene.
Thank you for the wonderfull story please do continue with your awsome writing.
Iris Ha (Chapter 13) - Wed 06 May 2009
| OMG I just finished reading chapter 12 and it was hilarious! you got me laughing here like an idiot with my bf staring at me like i'm crazy. I cant wait to read more!
| First hilarious the detailed comment about a charming age old practice...ye olde gossiping lol! Oh the plot thickens entirely and well, Lady Seiobo is fabulous. Love her to pieces, but that crap busting Lord Okuri...sigh, this longest of nights will not end well but at least, if only for a moment Sesshoumaru and Kagome find their own peace, however bittersweet. An excellent build up to what promises to be an intriguing and action filled chapter, if foreshadowing leads me to believe rightly.
A perfect 10! I am on pins and needles, my dear.
jojo661538 (Chapter 39) - Fri 17 Apr 2009
| your not really going to kill the general are you i think it would be much better if okuri was killed accidently instead by being confused or something but the general dying in my opinion is too much at this time like if kagome was losing a second father way too sad this chapter had me crying i almost couldnt keep reading but i kept going cause there is not denial this story is great keep up the great work ^_^
Possessed (Chapter 39) - Fri 17 Apr 2009
| OMG! I liked how you ended this, with her feeling his tears on her skin...
I am going to burst with anticipation over the dirty double dealings going on! I loved the dialogue at the banquet, with everyone trying to be so careful with what they said! And Kagome allowing herself to be played... shame on her! She should have seen that for what it was, a manipulation!
I am all caught up in intrigue of this story... please don't make me suffer for too long...
| I absolutely love you and your stories becauseI know that I will end the chapter entertained and this chapter was no exception. That tender moment between Sesshoumaru and Kagome pulled at my hearstrings, it was so sweet and heartbreaking at the same time. I also see that you have the stage set for some major upcoming drama to unleash starting with the hunt and I look forward to see what you have in store. Please keep up the good work and take care!
Your Fan,
Sesshoumaru's Lady
| I really do enjoy how you write about the love Sess feels for Kagome and realizes the deeper meaning behind it. Great Job!
@@@ (Chapter 1) - Sun 29 Mar 2009
| i have been reading peace treaty since the start and i'm dying of anticipation for what will happen next....pls post the next chapter....it shall be greatly appreciated....tnx
| okuri, akagawa, and kurono can all suck my big toe...lolz, but anyway please continue soon
| Another great chapter. i enjoy all of your stories so much. When you say you will be tending to other stories for a while i really really really hope you mean Dancing.... <> :-)
Possessed (Chapter 38) - Thu 29 Jan 2009
| SQUEEE!!! I LOVE the political machinations!!!
He finally agreed to spar with her and she popped him! LOL! The way they ultimately respect each other really strikes a chord in me, it makes them seem more real.
The ending of this chapter was perfect. Such a sweet scene with Kagome realizing she wants to be the mother of his children... I swear I could scent that 'new baby' smell!
| damn loving this chapter............continue soon
Possessed (Chapter 37) - Mon 19 Jan 2009
What a beautiful chapter, from start to finish! I tend to savor each word and it always ends to soon for me... so I read it again! The morning scene was so peaceful, heartfelt, and touching; and the relationship between Kagome, the maid and Jaken is so believable... (I can't wait to see how the evil plans manifest!) I love your gift for dialogue, it really brings the characters to life!
I felt her desolation at the realization of the problems age would bring for her and her future pups. But she is not one to be held back for long by the things that cannot be changed and her attitude is refreshing. I can't help feeling she is someone I would like to be friends with.
Thanks for another visit into their lives, I thoroughly enjoyed it! I can't wait to see what happens next!
| You never fail to deliver…
I began to smile with the first lines so gracefully expressed and the privacy and intimacy of the moments shared between our Hero and Heroine, artfully done establishing strong foundations to a rollicking superb, exceptionally enjoyable chapter.
Dear lord, Kagome is saddled with a bimbo for a handmaid lolol! This should prove rather “challenging” to say the least.
I could just see the wheels turning in Akeno Sato’s head as he lifted his eyes from Yukika’s ample inviting bosom. Has the girl no edit mode? Geeeeeeez, idiot much! Though I chucked to myself when he did make the rather astute observation about the distinct possibilities that Lord Okuri was possibly approaching senility re his chances with Sesshoumaru’s Mate (snicker and wink).
The quiet romantic in Kagome was beautifully expressed with the circlet of intertwined hair, how apropos – in and yo (Yin/Yang) – balance, completion, carried through beautifully with the theme of time and its fleeting quality and appreciating the NOW of it all.
I must also quickly say. Sesshoumaru’s dry wit was appreciated and her equally succinct retorts. They are magnificent together in the world you have created for them and a feast for the reader. Equal but separate. I tend to like this in a story line. THAT is the key to a successful couple in fiction and in life. That and a sound beating on occasion (wink) according to the White Prince lolol!
A joyous feast of words …write on, woman!
ElegantPaws
sessygurl (Chapter 37) - Thu 15 Jan 2009
| I was really hoping for pups! Lovely chapter as always.
Hmm... >.> where did the traitorous scoundral take Yukika off to? Hmm... very interesting. More please! :D
l33t (Chapter 37) - Thu 15 Jan 2009
For some reason, this chapter seemed shorter, even though I knew it wasn't. I felt so horrible for Kagoem when reality hit her that she was just a human and Sesshomaru would outlive her in the long run. I'm curious, now, to see what the maid is up to. As usual, this chapter is very well-written. Keep up that awesome work!
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