My heart melted at this...
“May I fill your tea cup, my pet?”
“Certainly, dear little lychee.”
Haha!!!! I can just see/feel the seething animosity and sexual tension! LOLOL
Noooooooooooo I wish I didn't read that last part!!! No!!!!!????????????
I truly enjoyed this tale
Wow this is some deep stuff here
Men this story is filled with true intrigue, and pure genius. It is a great storyline perhaps the best I've seen in a long time. I do not know why I only found this now after years of being on here.
Woa woa things got a little datk there with the self blame and taking punishment. Surely there could have been another way. Well atleast she'll look good for protecting a youkai child.
Ok wayyyyyyyy too OC in this one honey bee, booboo ???? haha. No, it seemed to contemporary.
Oh my!! I loved this chapter! Things got rather exiting! What they're doing to Kagome is absolutely horrid! With the Sub beads and all. But my oh my its a rather lovely turn of events! Things are going rather well. Seems to be a fetching read!
The only thing I would say is a little bad about this story is that it drones on. Kinda like in the Council meeting where they said get to the point, that's exactly how i felt. Its kinda touch and go. You go great at one point but then say unnecessary things where i kinda feel like skipping :(. The story seems to have so much potential though, its a lovely twist, Earth Sun, Moon, the council, Kagome, I'm very intrigued by it. But I would say working on being concise. I really hope it gets better. I read a story that dorned on and it barely had much hood part about Kagome and Sesshomaru. I truly hope this is not the case with this one. :)
Wonderful story. I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much for writing and posting it for everyone. :)
s_spina (Chapter 57) - Wed 15 May 2013
ohhh beautiful story!
I remember years ago having read only at the Longest night hunty party since you were still writing it, and with time, I forgot about the name of the story
It is until today (gah I went though all the story in less than 6 hours!) while browsing the forum that I saw this listed under epic stories and what a JOY it was to read it!!!
thank you for your work
though I am not happy with the ending.. Kagome dies due to age (;_;)
poor Sesshoumaru!
Choyan (Chapter 57) - Mon 02 Jul 2012
Wow.....*0* this fic is amaaaaaaaaazing!!! LOVE IT!! OvO~~
it's realistic, and i love how you've develop their relationship gahh~~ <3
Gonna read your other fics now xD Will end up rereading this one too <3
Thank you!!!
Fantastic story, complex and realistic. you are truely a talented writer.
Sami (Chapter 1) - Mon 09 Apr 2012
I know I'm reviewing the first chapter, but after fighting with Dokuga to let me log in and review, I just want to get this out.
What an amazing story. In the begining, I wasn't too fond of how you portrayed Sesshomaru, but in the end, I think it worked out super well. Kagome and Sesshomaru's relationship is crazy, hectic, and full of sex and I loved that. You really brought their relationship to life, and the detail to the fights, the battle plans, and all the hectic castle heirarchy was truly amazing. The relationship between General Tashio and his mate was fun, and it brought a lighter note to serious chapters. Gina was AWESOME, and I'm so glad she ended up with someone in the end.
I tip my hat to you good Author/ess and I'm off to read more of your brilliant work. :)
Ta
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