I'm confused. They went from wearing buckskin outfits for the wedding to a gown and tuxedo for the battle to catch his wife? 

Err... I would say it was interesting. But also confusing, first there is a company owning many strip clubs in modern Vegas, then an honorable tribe of Indian foxes who place great importance on chastity before marriage and modesty but also manage a strip club? Right, then at first Kagome does not want the dog obviously looking at her for a good romp in the sheets (going so far as a commitment), then somehow they appear in a forest (when did they leave Vegas anyhow) and there is a short battle as per not explained tradition. Then suddenly they magically love each other after sex... and let's not forget her out of the blue miko powers.

I'm sorry, I enoyed reading it, really I did (I would have not read this far otherwise nevermind leaving a review) but the elements don't make sense to me. It has great potential and you can write really good. But it seems you tried to include everything at once.

I love your stories. Please do the sequel to the inu mating. Waiting while bitting nails

thats one hell of a mating night...lol

ur lemon want the greatest no offense. u said that he hadnt wn wich made me think that she was going to fight him or something but u didnt have her do that so u knida confused me

i loved it it was amasing

WHOA Ok i really need a cold shower. But anyway that was seriously amazing and i mean the whole fic was not just this chapter!!

great story!! i love how you have kagome dominating sesshoumaru and also the last chapter so far you have her dancing when she didn't in the beginning!! keep up the great work!

it was interesting, it's more lime then lemon though, while there was talk of it it wasnt overly detailed, it was on the lighter side though still very good as an over all update!

*snickers this is so amusing!*

I very much like this! You did a ge=reat job, and I hope Kagome gives Sesshomary hell!

okay! I'm amused!