Err... I would say it was interesting. But also confusing, first there is a company owning many strip clubs in modern Vegas, then an honorable tribe of Indian foxes who place great importance on chastity before marriage and modesty but also manage a strip club? Right, then at first Kagome does not want the dog obviously looking at her for a good romp in the sheets (going so far as a commitment), then somehow they appear in a forest (when did they leave Vegas anyhow) and there is a short battle as per not explained tradition. Then suddenly they magically love each other after sex... and let's not forget her out of the blue miko powers.
I'm sorry, I enoyed reading it, really I did (I would have not read this far otherwise nevermind leaving a review) but the elements don't make sense to me. It has great potential and you can write really good. But it seems you tried to include everything at once.
it was interesting, it's more lime then lemon though, while there was talk of it it wasnt overly detailed, it was on the lighter side though still very good as an over all update!
