Very nice chapter, keep it coming.
Cool chapter, keep it coming.
Good chapter, keep it coming.
Nice chapter, keep it coming.
Another great chapter, keep it coming.
Lovely chapter, keep it coming.
Great chapter, keep it coming.
Poor Inuyasha, keep it coming.
Wonderful chapter, keep it coming.
Poor Kagome, keep it coming.
Cool chapter, keep it coming.
Cool chapter, keep it coming.
Suka25 (Chapter 44) - Sat 21 Feb 2015
more!!!!
Eva (Chapter 44) - Wed 18 Feb 2015
Poor Inu. Who knows what trouble he's gotten himself into. Kagome isn't the only trouble magnet in the bunch. I love the developing relationship between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. I can't wait to find out little Rin's part of the puzzle.
Eva (Chapter 43) - Tue 10 Feb 2015
This is my first review for this story. I'm just going to jump on in. I usually don't pick up AU fics but I loved the Syndrome. It's lead me to read your other works. I really love the direction this one has taken. It's been a wild ride. I really don't miss the Kagome bashing and I've enjoyed the whole puzzle pieces falling in place aspect of this winding narrative. I'm eager to see where this goes, but I'm happy to let it unwind at the pace you've set. The interactions of the characters are what is keeping me looking for up dates.
I enjoy chapters such as this where you change perspectives and focus on different secondary characters as well. The glimpse into Souta's life was fun. I find myself wondering how this will effect him since there will have to be a choice for his parents in the end. I wonder if he would happily follow his Mom and sister into the past to be with his dad, or whether he's too tied to his present. I guess we'll find out when the time is right.
Thanks for sharing your creativity with us.
Please continue! Really loving the new chappys!!! :-)
candy (Chapter 43) - Sun 01 Feb 2015
I have fallin in love with your story it is so great please up date ASAP! :-)
I'm so glad you updated this!
Keep going! <3
I will wait as patiently as necessary for this amazing masterpiece to be completed. I hope all is well with you and to read more of your work soon, whichever piece that is.
-KD
Please update soon! Out of the stories I have read on this site, this is the first story I have added to My Favorite Stories.
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