"Fluff-zilla" ROFL. I about fell out of my chair laughing when I read that. Great chapter!
:giggles: Nami-Sess-mom is AWESOME! Just HILARIOUS! ^_^ Love her! Can't wait to see what she says/does next.
And I love Sesshomaru's sense of humor. Is there a reason he didn't bother to put on a shirt after bathing?
Booyaka! Miroku's on the scene! :happy dances: Wait... :blinks: When did Kagome contact him? O_o Did I miss it... or just forget?
Thanks so much for writing!
Still loving this little fic. So much has happened to Kagome, surrounded by werewolves and big bad youkai.... I wonder what Lady Mother will have up her sleeve?
Sooo much fun! I am really enjoying this little romp! Youare doing an excellent job here and thank you for taking the time out from your chaos to make me happy.
I love the way you described the palace and the gardens, such vivid and gorgeous images!
Miroku is always the calm diplomatic one when others huff and puff hehe.
I wonder if Inuyasha will make an appearance?
Miroku enters...he always seems to be the best guide, family member, backup for Kags. What trouble will she find next?
As always in a Sess/Kag... poor Kouga! :snickers: Yes... I wonder what the wolves will think. Too bad Kagome didn't have time to leave an "I'm fine when I left" note for the poor protective wolves.
I love a eyes-twinkling-only mischievous Sesshomaru. ^_^
Thanks for writing!
Gah I love this SO much. The whole chapter was amazing, but I particularly love how Sessy fought so gracefully with Kagome slung over one shoulder. And how she complained about them breaking her house. Very funny. Plus who doesn't love a good slap on the butt? Haha esp if it's from Sesshoumaru. Can't wait for more! ^_^
Awesome chapter! I loved the action and Sesshoumaru is just a delight to read in this story! I like your portrayal of him!
REDWOLF (Chapter 13) - Wed 24 Aug 2011
What an absolutely FANTASTIC fic. I am a fan!!!!
Wonderful Chapter! I thoroughly enjoyed it. I enjoyed your action scene, it was brief but a promise of what is to come. Thanks!
Caleesci
I LOVE this story! LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!! If I can catch you, I am gonna chain you to your computer and make you write until it is finished, even if I have to bake cookies, cakes and brownies to keep you fed while you work! I admit, there were a couple of places where I wondered if I should point them out, but I really think that those were differences between British and American English. Your writing skills, though always quite good, have really improved, I am so impressed! I see that you are heading for professional level! Keep working, girl, I've always thought you had it in you to be one of the best and to go further than most. Just don't go all JK Rowling on us! LOL!
OMGosh! Give me leave to breathe!!!! This gets better 'n' better every chapter! Excellent work, Aimee, abosolutely brilliant!
Talk about heart-stopping moments! You've had me holding my breath more times in these last couple of chapters than is good for me! Really good writing, Girl! Your storytelling has always been top-notch, but you have definitely moved up a level! Maybe two or three!
Aimee, this is progressing so wonderfully! I am totally intrigued by his non-human view of humans. You are doing a fantastic job of portraying Sesshoumaru.
I love this description: Pressing a hand to her hummingbird heart, it conveys her startlement so beautifully!
There were knick-knacks all over the shelves
Awww, Aimee, I had to go back and read through all your reviews to find the one I left you. I had started reading this before and had forgot to mark it! Dummy me! But I love it and I love the changes and growth I see in your writing. Furthermore, I don't know if you made any faux pas in the last 2 chapters because I was so enthralled by the story I couldn't notice anything!
oooh, new treat! how is it that i haven't seen this one before? or did i start it and forget it, as i have forgotten so many things of late? but i love the beginning of it!
Lol, the thought of Sessh smacking Kagome's butt is... yummy! XD I SO want to be her in that moment *fangirl squeak*
PLEASE update soon! (preferably tommorow ^-^)
So exciting! I really like your storyline and I can't wait to see how it plays out.
TrianaStyx (Chapter 13) - Tue 23 Aug 2011
Awesome!!!! :D Loved it! Of course Sesshomaru wouldn't leave Kagome! Time to see what he calls home! Can't wait for you to update again!
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