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sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 3) - Mon 21 Mar 2011

0o0o0o0o i'm so excited to see this fic update! i find it's one of my favorites!


Silverwing (Chapter 2) - Tue 15 Feb 2011

This seems like a fun story. I am intersted to know what happens next and what type of world it is that they live in. Thank you for posting this!


Meara (Chapter 2) - Tue 15 Feb 2011

I definitely enjoyed it, and can't wait to see where it goes. Keep up the good work!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 2) - Mon 14 Feb 2011

KITTY!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 2) - Mon 14 Feb 2011

lickie Sess! i love this!

more please!

*wiggles update bribery c0okies at you*


ChaoticReverie (Chapter 2) - Mon 14 Feb 2011

O_o Questions indeed. I'm curious to see how she reacts to the change of scenery upon waking. Good job, can't wait for more!


vicki patterson (Chapter 2) - Mon 14 Feb 2011

love it , keep up the great work can hardly wait for your next up date please hurry

 


KEdakumi (Chapter 2) - Mon 14 Feb 2011

Awww... He snuggled.  Too Cute!  Can't wait for more!


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 2) - Mon 14 Feb 2011

awww how sweet of him!!! I'm betting though that Kagome's prolly going to freak a lil bit lol. Anywho awesome job and i can't wait to see what happens next!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Feb 2011

O_O interesting!


Lala Insane (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Feb 2011

Good first chapter, I really enjoyed it. Can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
-Lala <3


Quiet Whisper (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Feb 2011

Ooooh this sounds interesting, I can't wait to see where you go with it! And srsly... I was a good girl last year... why couldn't I have gotten a Sessho on my doorstep? lol


Rowdys girl (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Feb 2011

Aimee Blue, this story is new!

Whatever is Kagome gonna do?

Hmmm, this seems a bit different for you. I'm in for the ride, make it a wild one. I especially love the imagery, you do have a talent for painting pictures with words. I can just picture the gorgeous light of a Tokyo sunset embellished with the bright neon and LED lights of advertising signs.

I noticed a couple of things that you might want to check out:

Today, the [permission] persimmon tree outside her window in the little garden

she thought that she’d have liked her [presence] present better

This is just a suggestion cuz I try to avoid using a word too often when I write so I'm sensitive to it in other people's works:

As his head lowered onto her knee she got the impression that he was fighting the lure of sleep with all that he had, but he was powerless to stop the seductive sway of [sleep] somnolence.

 

Rowdy


KEdakumi (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Feb 2011

Now I know what to put on my Christmas list this year! ;P


ChaoticReverie (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Feb 2011

Yay new story!!! I loved it, and I can't wait to see more! Good girl indeed. I wish Santa would bring me somethign that nice... though I don't know quite how one might wrap something like that. He's certainly no stocking stuffer... O_o The picture 'Don't Open Until X-Mas' came to mind there... Hehehe...

Ahem, perviness aside, it was really great. I loved the endearing way you've portrayed her thus far, right down to the sheep jammies and mismatching socks. Very much Kagome! I won't tell you to hurry with the next update - because you can't rush perfection - but I will say that I will be hoping that your muse is kind to you and that nothing happens that might hamper your ability to write. 

Much, much love!

Also, I just wanted to point out that I caught a little booboo near the end. Where you were saying Kagome wished Santa had dropped her 'presence' off at the front door, I'm assuming you meant present. :P Happens to us all, dear, no worries!

*huggles and cookies for you for being awesome*


inu fan (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Feb 2011

i really like the beginning - can't wait to see shere you go from here


hopuchan (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Feb 2011

wow! i can tell already how addictive this story will be! please update soon!


Izzy (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Feb 2011

O: please keep going! I have to read whats next


WildcatYST (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Feb 2011

Very interesting start! Update soon!


Kagome~Tashio (Chapter 1) - Fri 11 Feb 2011

omg. this was an awsome start. hope u update soon!


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