Sesshomaru is totally attracted to her. Hot.
Kagomeis oblivious as usual and rightfully scared of big bad Sesshomaru. Hilarious.
They are stuffed in an alley. ...Some sort of H word that is a synonym for why.
This is good.
Well, first of all, I'm not sure why you don't have any reviews yet, so, while I'm striving to fix that problem, I'll also ask you this: Why in the name of all that's green and leafy in Ireland did you stop right there?!?
I'm so very intrigued at this little prologue, and I have to say that you've caught my attention, a feat that most authors can't really do without some sort of miracle.
Anyway, I love your sentences, and I know that that's an odd thing to say, but your flow is absolutely amazing. You've also got Kagome and Sesshomaru's character down to a T, and I love the fact that Sesshomaru's thoughts are so sarcastic--he's funny without even realizing it!
Wonderful job!
~Aubrey
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