I am so glad you're back! Better long wait than never. ;)

Aw, poor Kira! I wonder if Kagome's determination will be enough? 

Thanks so much for writing.

I love love love your story!! I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work!!

I am slighty confused though. Is the land the North or the South?? You have both wrote down in different chapters as the same persons lands. 

Love it. More please x

I love this! It's incredible!

i hope they find her soon!

Maybe mokomoko will play spy and find her!!

kagome pregnant?

awesonmess in the making

please update

Please update! I want Lady Kira to be rescued!!!

Keep it coming

I think its time Kagome purified Raiden's balls. :) I will give you a cookie if this happens :)

Love it so far, I think it should have a little more SessKag moments. It's mostly kira centered I love her, but it would be nice for more SessKag fluff!!!

omg i am SOOOOO LOOKING FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!! this is very interesting and i really wonder whats going to happen next :) cant wait for u to update! XD

hahaha... nothing like issuing an impossible order... get dressed but no clothes... I love it *grin*

Overall, your story has been very interesting and I enjoy reading it. But, forgive me for being a grammar and spelling Nazi, I noticed quite a few discrepancies in tenses and spelling. When writing, it is easier to understand a story when written in past tense and you switch tenses quite often. As for the spelling mistakes, they seem to have been checked by spell check and because of that, they were overlooked. For example,

 I am not pleased , but will allow her to make her on decisions. I will only tell you this once. My cousin is not to be force to suffer you attentions. 

1. 'pleased ,' should have no space between itself and the comma.

2. ‘on’ should be ‘own’. It is a simple mistake caused by typing too fast.

3. ‘force’ should be ‘forced’. While the sentence itself is in a future tense, verb tense likes to be a royal pain sometimes. Now, a fast reader would have skipped this and moved on because the brain automatically fixes the tense when read, but things like this stick out like a sore thumb to me.

Other than some minor errors in spelling and grammar, I love the story. Keep writing, so I can keep reading!

>.<

Lexi

lexikatt@yahoo.com

I like your story.  Mokomoko is very funny.  I also like the drama with in the demon court.

Great job! Loved the chapter. Keep up the good work!

oh goody...i wanna see a catfight...lol!!!!

part of me hopes that they gut raiden >:l that hooker! FEH!

I was hoping that Raiden would be redeemable, and that the reason he cheated on Kira was for some noble cause, but it is obvious he is just a big old jerk (I would use less kind words here...)!

Yes! Finally! Another chapter! Lol, I'm so impatient. I like this new demon, 'Yoshi', so far but I wonder is he really that nice and is Raiden really that dumb as only a male can be, a male with power.  I wonder how this gathering will play out. I await the next chapter.

--Kaminoko (c)2011

ha! =x mokomoko can't have all the fun!

poor moko moko