Aw! I'm glad everything worked out. ^.^ I'm sad it's over but really happy too. Good ending.
Ah, while the wait was long, the finish was so good. I am so glad that you finished this. Perhaps this will be the inspriation to get my backside moving, but overall, you have something to be very proud of here. Great job!!!
Black Light Brightness (Chapter 16) - Tue 04 May 2010
YAY!!!!! is it over?
wait.... not Yay it's over but YAY its a good chapter AND is it over. i DO love the story! ^_^
Awww what a cute ending to a great little story! I enjoyed reading this one a lot and will enjoy reading it again!! Thank you for sharing it with us!!!!
That was a beautifully sweet ending. congratulations on completing another story!
What a satisfying yet extremely humorous ending. I loved the part about Tsukiko learning to say ball and run from the dog next door. That was priceless.
saku (Chapter 15) - Sat 10 Apr 2010
Why does Kagome care so much for Kikyou and her baby? It´s exaggerated in my opinion. Sure, the baby is innocent but she has her own baby on the way and it will be hard enough to care for it without having to care for a second one. She really should care for her own family first. As if it´s not weird enough to be with the male again who left her for another without a backward glance now she wants to care for the baby of the female who she was left for? This is so unreal. This is not about being nice anymore, she lets herself being used by others. Her biggest mistake was getting involved with Sesshoumaru again. I can´t stand women who have no self-respect, they are too cowardly to live their lifes how they were meant to be and depend on others to make everything right.
;_; Poor kiddo. I'm glad that it most likely isn't his. If it's Inuyasha's will he keep it if it lives?
The kitchen moment with kag/sessh was cute, where he stopped her from pacing.
wow this was a great story, i hope everything works out! Keep up the awesome work!
I love love love love this story!! I'm sooo sad that there's only going to be one more chapter left!!!!! But you've really don't a wonderful job with this one and it's been an absolute delight to read!!!!
If the pup is InuYasha's, I can't see him stepping up to the plate and taking proper care of it. Maybe Rin will be really awesome, and offer to be a mother to the pup, if it's his. If it belongs to Naraku, I don't think he has any way of taking care of it. Kagome is so sweet, I can see her wanting to take care of it, even if it isn't Sesshomaru's. Which means she will be living under Kikyo's shadow for the rest of her life, unless Kikyo dies or skies. If she takes off, Sess and Kagome will still have to always worry and wonder if she's going to show up again and cause trouble. Poor Kagome! It was bad enough that she had to fall back in love with the guy that left her and married Kikyo, but taking care of Kikyo's baby would make it a million times worse!
Love your writing sooo much, can't wait to see how you make it all work out!
Two chapters I hadn't previously read! Happy dance! Everything seemed to be going so well for Kagome. Sesshomaru was making an effort to prove to her that he would not be an a**h*** and betray her again. She was growing confident in their relationship, and even thought they could work together to help Kikyo and the baby. It all seemed good, too good to be true. And then the end of chapter 14: "She had everything to be happy about. Absolutely nothing could go wrong." I got a frisson of foreboding reading the final words of this chapter. More drama ahead, I can feel it in my bones! All right!
You take as much time as you need to write your stories...I know I'll still be here, waiting, whining, whinging. Lovely word, that! Anyway, I've learned the hard way that one should NEVER badger writers to hurry their work, the writing suffers when they do. You can't make a good story come any faster than you can make a good cake by baking it faster. And this is such a good story! Though, I think Sesshoumaru is an idiot! Keep going at your pace, as I said, I'll be here, ready to read!
I had to re-read the previous chapters. I was wondering what happened to this one. This is a very good story. Why do I have the feeling that the father of Kikyou's baby is Naraku? We all know that he would want anything to do with the baby. Kami forbid if they find anything wrong with it being exposed to who knows what kind of drugs. What was she thinking? She wasn't. It's good that she's being forced to go to rehab. But good grief! What an irresponsible, stupid, shallow, drug-addicted, golddigging whore she is! Having a house means HAVING TO PAY THE MORTGAGE AND ALL THE OTHER BILLS THAT COME WITH IT! She needs a job (not like she's good for anything other than laying on her back). Didn't her parents teach her anything? Anyway, I look forward to reading more of this story.
Yay you update! *happy dance*
I can't wait to see what will happen next! Kagome's hesitation is normal, she just needs a little more time to realize that sesshomaru won't leave her again as he had done before. I just can't wait to see who the father of kikyo's child is. Naraku? Naraku is the most probable father since she had been more with him but it still can be inuyasha! one or the other, I can't wait to see and see the face of the father when he will learn that he had fathered a child with sesshomaru ex-wife! *grin* It can even be someone we don't know but I find it more "funny" to be naraku or inuyasha.
Can't wait to read more of the story! please, update as soon as you can, please!!
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