Waaawww!!!! Nice story!! Will you make another chapter? Or sequel? Pleaseeee .. I love greek mithology and here it is combined with sesskag so perfectly! 

This is amazing! I really wish that there was more to read *hint hint* :)

Ooh *fans self* def hottt !! Pls do a continuation.. I really like this piece

This is such s brsutiful written story!!

I hope there is another chapter!!!!!

Please update!!!!

I wish you would make a chapter story out of this...Awsome story!!!!

wow, even the god of death plays dirty. great story by the way :)

Continue it! The story of Persephone is not over. She still as to fall for him and the compromise has to be made. Exercise is important and if this is a writing exercise you should write as much as possible. Makes sense. Plus your work is just lovely to read :)

I really do enjoy this story. The ending is so great, it really keeps your readers wanting more. Perhaps you could continue it?

A DIFFERENT TAKE ON THE LEGEND! NICE JOB, I LIKE IT!

i really liked it plz plz do cont :)

Wow, that was beautiful. A lovely twist on an old tale. I would definitely enjoy seeing more unfold from this! Please continue!

OMG LOVE THE STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!

YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE IT IF NOT ITS LIKE A CRIME!!!!

LOVE EVERY SINGLE BIT THE SENSUALITY, SEXUAL TENSION, IT GAVE ME CHILLS I WAS AT THE EDGE OF MY SEAT

This was replendid!! A really great read. Really wish there was more. Perhaps a more detailed continuatioin of the rest of the myth? Pretty please?

NO PLEASE you can't leave it like that! I love this story and the way you unravel it like a christmas present is just refreshing. lol Please update and make it into a story. Thus had been one of the new stories with a good plot and flow. PLease update please >.<

OH MY GOD!!! you cant just leave it there!!! there is still so much more that can be done with this fic!!!

I absolutly loved it! Please write some more!!! please please please !

*extreme puppy dog eyes*

Please you need to continue this story is totally amazing.

even tho its a oneshot i looove it!!! u should continue !!

It would be nice to see this continued a little bit...maybe as a oneshot series

Please please please continue this story!!! It is so great and you left me completely hanging! I need more!

It was amazing! You did it very well. I was thinking of participating in this challenge, too. But with a drawing attempt, since one year ago I was starting InuYasha/Greek gods fanart, but I declined. Hades and Persephone had been my fave divine pairing since ever, so I think I'll get my drawing started!

I would love to read a sequel...!