Interesting. I'll be watching for more chapters. ^.^
This is a really great, wonderful, good, awesome, addicting story to read since i first started reading it your a very great, wonderful, good, awesome author who wrote this great, good, awesome, wonderful story and i cannot wait for more chapters please update soon!
I like your story so far. The incidents with the plot bunnies are funny. Tell me, are they well? I will say that your writing needs a little editing simply because of grammar errors, misspellings and the like. Also, There were a few "u's" instead of "you." Might be a good idea to find yourself a beta. Can't wait for the next installment. Best of luck.
Eden (Chapter 11) - Mon 14 Mar 2011
I'm curious as to where things will lead as well :D.
Finally! Haven got her to agree with what I've believed ever since I first watched the anime from the beginning. Kagome NEVER tried to go out of her way to train. I always got frustrated with the writers of the anime leaving her weak and constantly needing someone's protection. Also, they left her in modern clothes which was rediculous. I'm glad you took her out of them.
Those voices in her dreams could be trying to trick her. As of now, I don't trust them.
When Kaede told Inuyasha and Kikyou they were no longer welcome in her hut, what about the rest of the tachi that turned their backs on Kagome? They should be barred from her hut also.
Frankly, I think you're doing a good job with this story. The chapters may be a little shorter than some are used to, and there may be some spelling or grammar problems, but they are really are very few compared to some I've seen! If *I* were you, I would be very proud, and would continue posting this story here, even if it doesn't garner the reviews that it deserves. Then again, I'm kinda selfish, cuz I'd like to see where you're going with this. Keep up the good work!
:D
~~Wiccan~~
Panda (Chapter 4) - Mon 20 Dec 2010
LOVE IT PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! N UPDATE MORE!!!!
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