Reviews for Mad World by Erynnn

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lara (Chapter 8) - Fri 28 Jan 2011

I want to see Kagome & Sessh together & I don't like this other chick & I would think that Kagome would be intelligent enough to see this woman as a danger to the world.A hellhound wanting to counquer the lands on earth & the only children she can bare are more like her powerful,deadly evil beings & Kagome knows not all Youkai are evil but this one obviously is & especially afeter hearing Sessh tell her what he knows Kagome should be behind him supporting him in his dislike of her dangerous,selfish & power hungry ways & also with the averse reaction that her Reiki had should tell her that she is too dangerous to procreate. I don't think Kagome would be so stupid as to not see,feel & be aware of this either & also want to see her gone as much as Sessh does if not more so.   I really hope you dispose of this woman & do something to make Kagome more appealing as an intended Mate for Kagome.I wish she would become a miko-Inu Youkai with a mark of Royalty & then find that  was the reason the well sent her back was because it was where she belonged & that her heritage was only hidden as a means of survival as was the reason for her being sent to the future was for her protection & to gain knowledge to save Youkai from extinction or something & that her healing from this infection or her birthday or something causes her to change back into the rare miko Inu youkai she was born as.

Or if you could make it that Miko's such as Kagome can birth purebred Youkai like the youkai father or more powerful than the youkai father or something.

 I do like this story I guess I just don't like this new female character you've introduced & I really want to see Kagome & Sessh together & want Kagome to have a purpose as she is feeling lost & alone trapped in the past without reason. Plus the fact that all feel that Sessh's father's death was caused by his love of a human & the fact he mated her & her weakening the bloodline with hanyou that can lose control causing death & destruction.

I'm just looking for Kagome to have a purpose & I hate how every ff has her suffering & unloved or one shots of her having wild meaningless sex with Sessh & I guess I'm trying to find the reason for Sessh's beasts interest in Kagome being more than lust so he doesn't go to a concubine as I also hate reading a Sessh/Kagome ff where he's screwing other females.


sheridan (Chapter 7) - Fri 14 Jan 2011

soooo i love this story!! :D annnnnnnnd i have started a drawing of Hassuru for yoooou :D i can only hope and pray i get it down right lol :D 


KEdakumi (Chapter 7) - Thu 13 Jan 2011

Ah, enter the evil witch!  Will she melt if you throw water on her too?  :D

 

Cant' wait for the next chapter!


lara (Chapter 6) - Wed 05 Jan 2011

more please & tell me that he falls in love with her & they end up together....& not in like 20 chapters   but they at least acknowledge their interest in each other soon


GreyEcho (Chapter 5) - Sun 02 Jan 2011

O_O! Well, that's not good.

I really liked this chapter and the reaction scene when Sessh. when carrying Kagome...and well a lot of things. Can't wait till the next chapter.


lara (Chapter 5) - Thu 30 Dec 2010

I really like this story & I can't wait to see what happens next. I really hope Sessh doesn't go to his concubines or if he does try to his beast refuses to have anything to do with them & refuses to allow Sessh to be even tempted by them & if anything his beast feels disgust with the idea of being near other women & gets agitated. Since in your story so far you have yet to tell us why the well's magic allowed Kagome to return to the past & it would appear that since the well's magic & fate work together & this is a site for Kagome & Sessh ff's I am hoping that they end up together as a couple.

I'm starting to panic knowing that Kagome is stuck on the other side of the well with no purpose & alone,now injured & under the care of Sessh who knows he's attracted to her but wants to refuse this attraction due to her being human & the last we read he is looking to go to a concubine asap to rid himself of finding Kagome,a weak human, attractive physically (I hate the idea of him being intimate with another knowing Kagome is right there), can't you make it where he finds a scroll that says powerful mikos can birth full blooded youkai with miko powers or immune to miko powers. I'm dying for you to give him a loophole to work with so he decides to court her & go for her only. I don't care if you make it where it turns out she's a rare type of miko-inuyoukai that is born youkai & if in danger as an infant the parents can use a spell to hide her as a human till she's mature enough to care for herself & then her youkai comes back or if she's ill or injured to where her humanity can't sustain her then her body intsinctually returns her youkai so she'll be immune to infection .

 I really hope you let us know soon what's going to happen between them.Since it is rated MA then I imagine at some point it's going to go in some direction that will have sex,gore,violence or some level of adult behavior that is not appropriate for kids & it did list romance & erotica in it's GENRE listings & I like happy endings so I'm trying to prepare myself for Kagome suffering or finding happiness . So far I'm really enjoying this but I  can't help but panic at the thought or mention of him going to the concubines.

Sorry if I'm being a whiny wimp.


amy (Chapter 5) - Tue 28 Dec 2010

KEEP GOING!


DD (Chapter 5) - Mon 27 Dec 2010

It's been a while since I've read a really good story and I'm loving this one so far. I'd be really disappointed if you discontinued this story. I thought the last chapter was great and that it went perfectly along with the story. So please, please, please continue this story for those of us who really enjoy it!!!

Merry Christmas and Happy New Year

DD


Nilee1 (Chapter 5) - Mon 27 Dec 2010

I liked the last chapter, and I love this one. Please continue with this story.


InuLover (Chapter 5) - Mon 27 Dec 2010

OH GAWD!  You must continue! Please?!  I want to see what happens after Kagome arrives at Sesshomaru's home!  Will Sesshomaru go to his concubines?  Will Kagome start trying to play matchmaker?  Oh, and, will Inuyasha re-appear in the story?  So many questions!!  Plz, plz, plz, continue! :D

BTW, I know I didn't review, or did I? on chapter 4, but, I liked the chapter myself.  It was very descriptive, and, they were still travelling, so, what more did people expect?  You included some of Kagome's thoughts, and her reactions to the demonic auras she felt, and, Sesshomaru's thoughts on how to get her over her reactions.  Plus, you included the description of his palace and village, which I always like to see.  I always find it fasinating to read other people's ideas on what Sesshomaru's palace would look like.  So, yeah, I felt the chapter was necessary and very good. :D


Kanna37 (Chapter 5) - Mon 27 Dec 2010

A continuation would be nice...

Amber


lara (Chapter 3) - Thu 09 Dec 2010

I would like to see both ...the growing friendship,hopefully romantic relationship between the two & her getting acquainted with the castle workings...but I was thinking, what would be the reason for her continued stay there once she heals, unless before she heals he decides he enjoys her companionship ,intelligence, knowledge in many facets of dealing with other races,groups,running a large household ,healing abilities & her knowledge of the future a great use that he would be foolish to give up. Of course to help their relationship it would be nice if he found scrolls on powerful miko's birthing full blooded youkai that were immune to holy powers or they discover during her healing that she is changing into something else (possibly the reason the well took her to the past & closed...she's from the past) & maybe now that she has reached a certain age she becomes a miko inu youkai who was sent thru the well as a way to protect her & her parent gave its life to use it's ability to hide her youkai side & protect her & now with the jewel gone & her youkai returning the well used it's magic a final time to return her to the real era of her birth as the last living pure bred miko inu youkai.

     Oh well , for whatever reason before they get closer or she gets more involved with the castles workings there has to be a reason for him to decide she should stay there. I for one would love to see them together Mated have full blooded pups & having a long,long life together. Otherwise her reason for returning to the past will have no purpose only sadness, losing her future family forever & having not even a friend left for companionship now that she is stuck forever in the past.

      I like happy endings & I look forward to see where this is going.


addiesmoon (Chapter 3) - Thu 09 Dec 2010

oh it so good i cant wait for the next chapter please update soon


ghost_youkai (Chapter 3) - Tue 07 Dec 2010

Beautiful chapter! Can't wait to see the next one updated. Anyways about your opinion. If your stuck between the both, why not write about both? While Kagome is learning about the dealings of his castle, she is also realizing what he goes through which start a repectful friendship. Anyways just giving you my 2 cents. Whether you use it or not, I know it will be awesome. ~^_^~


Inulovely383 (Chapter 3) - Tue 07 Dec 2010

This is a wonderful story and I love the pace you have set for it.  The answer to your question is yes I think you should focus on their friendship, but I touch on her life adjusting to living with him in the west. Either way I believe the story will be incredible, keep up the great work.


Tsuki (Chapter 3) - Tue 07 Dec 2010

:D Can"t wait for more!


BlessedEpiphany (Chapter 3) - Tue 07 Dec 2010

I would rather you focus on their relationship. The castle backdrop is nice and all but I think Kagome's bonding with the staff is a little over done. Obviously there will be a little interaction seeing as there are other people around but I would rather see the intricacies of their relationship unfold. Keep up the wonderful job.


KEdakumi (Chapter 3) - Tue 07 Dec 2010

I really enjoy this story.  As for where to focus, I'd vote on focusing on their relationship with Kagome getting miffed at the lessons here and there.

I can't wait for more.  Good luck with your finals!

 


InuLover (Chapter 3) - Tue 07 Dec 2010

So, Sesshomaru is replacing one human female companion with another!  And, I was wondering where Jaken and Ah-Un were, too? 

Ok, in response to your question, I, for one, would like a little of both.  Well, more about the relationship, and some about Kagome's interactions with the staff of the castle.  Not so much the protocols of how she should act, because I'm sure she is smart enough to figure out all that.  But, I've always enjoyed stories that have Kagome interacting with different members of the court and the staff that works at the castle.  In some stories, those interactions may be bad and detrimental to her health, and others, she gets along very well with everyone.  But however you do it, there is always going to be some protocols and such that will probably need to be mentioned.  You know what I mean?  Especially since it is Lord Sesshomaru we're talking about.  You know, "Show me the proper respect, or else?" type of thing.

Anyhoo, however you write it, I know it will be worth reading!  Can't wait for the next chappie! :D

 

 


Fatcatmom (Chapter 2) - Wed 01 Dec 2010

Fantastic and engaging story--he has been so attentive and protective: what will happen when they cross the border? He should be even more possessive on his own turf! Please update soon!


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