I absolutely loved this story. I know you wrote it years ago; but I feel the need to say something anyway. Because I really liked it that much and wanted you to know people are still enjoying it.
Great story! I liked how they relationship progressed in the elevator. Awesome job. :)
love u so much (Chapter 7) - Sun 31 Oct 2010
reading this again after so many years....still one of my faves!!
<3
Rosa (Chapter 6) - Sat 02 Oct 2010
That was the best scene I have ever read, in all the fanfiction sites I have been on. I LOVE this story. Keep up the good work!
I love this story. I hope there is a sequel. I would love to know what happens next if there is going to be. It was great.
| i really enjoyd this.
great work!
| i am enjoying this!
Roos (Chapter 7) - Wed 12 Aug 2009
| *Laughs her ass off* Poor Kagome! Wait... What am I saying!?! I wish I was Kagome! *Turns into a pile of mush while dreaming of Sesshoumaru* Daaamn Girl! That was hoooot! Go you! Though I am definitely jealous of Kags... Thank you very very much for the story!
This is an awesome story, I really hope you write a sequel.
| Thank you for the story. It was plausible and delicious!
iFlair (Chapter 1) - Tue 11 Nov 2008
I absolutely loved this story. I was hooked at the beginning until the end. I cannot wait until the sequel. I hope it will be as good as the first. Keep up the good work.
| For someone whose first language is not English, this was exceptionally written. The few errors made here and there are nothing and it didn't take away from the enjoyment of the story.
I've read "elevator" stories in the past and each one has it's own thrill factor but in this one I could actually feel Kagome's nervousness, her discomfort as he just sat there not trying to converse with her to ease the tension of being trapped. I felt her angst at being looked at like she were prey. Sesshoumaru having an internal discussion with himself over his attraction to Kagome was so much like his character is portrayed in fanfiction. His frustration dealing with this attraction was so fun and believable. My husband told me that my innocent actions and movements were a turn on for him too. He used to wonder if I did the things I did on purpose or was I really that naive.(I was honestly that naive when it came to male's sexual attractions)
You have done a excellent job with this fic. JEN
GrneyedMinx (Chapter 8) - Sun 31 Aug 2008
| Cute story!!
| That was awesome. So cool and unexpected. You managed to portray both characters so well!! It was so ...wownesss. Absolutely yummy.
| Excellent!! I can't wait for the sequel
| That....Was....Great! I apsolutely(if that's how you spell the word) Loved it! Lol.......I hope that you have a lot of ideas so that you make a sequel! Lol......I have so many thoughts going through my head just thinking of what you will probably put if there ever is one! I maen, poor Kags, she just fainted after she found out his identaty! Hehehe
~*Twilight*~
ren_sohma (Chapter 7) - Wed 13 Aug 2008
| Man it was hot. Great fic. If u ever do get to write a sequel, i'm definitely goin to read it. poor Kagome, lol.
MLMonty (Chapter 7) - Sun 03 Aug 2008
| I would love to see a sequel to this where she turns down the job since she slept with her boss and he has to chase after her. So many complications that there could be in a sequel.
Hairann (Chapter 1) - Fri 27 Jun 2008
| Very well done. I just loved this story. My favorite part was the very last line. Perfect sentence to end the story on. 5/5
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