Well written story, good flow, keep up the good work, and more updates please!
(Chapter 2) - Fri 19 Nov 2010
It's getting more and more interesting. I can't wait to read the next chapter :)
ashleekyle (Chapter 1) - Mon 15 Nov 2010
Very interesting can't wait for the rest to follow. I love suspense stories and you did an awesome job, grabbing the reader right from the start.
(Chapter 1) - Thu 11 Nov 2010
I think it is off to an interesting start! Keep up the good work and I am excited to read more :D
(Chapter 1) - Wed 10 Nov 2010
The first chapter looks very promising and suspenseful. I hope you plan to continue this story. :)