OK...I am very confused... How is it that Kagome 'never existed'? Never was any one's heroine, or forever forgiving, or any other stuff that was named? And why is she insane? I hope this gets explained in later chapters because I would hate for this to be one of those stories that leaves you confused the whole way through and the end is something left to be desired. That would be very disappointing, since it sounds good so far besides you know, the confusion.
wow.... just wow.... this story was awesome and I lost track of how many loops I was thrown through. I've laughed and I cried and that's my way of saying this was an awesome story. Wonderful job! :D
sad reader (Chapter 10) - Sun 07 Mar 2010
I have had to stop reading your fic because the term breeder grates so intensly upon my nerves that I can no longer stand it. I think it is out of character for Kagome to simply accept the derogitory title and to have no lingering emotional breakdown as a result of 'HAVING JUST BEEN RAPED!' Sorry, you have good ideas but I can't help but feel violated myself from reading this story.
Truly inspiring! I loved every word of this story. I bawled like a baby on the last chapter. I hope to see more of your work in the future!
I have to say this was a wonderful story. I was unable to stop reading. I love how you used the Wizard of Oz throughout the story.
philsphan (Chapter 1) - Sun 22 Nov 2009
LOVE YOUR STORY ALREADY!!! Excellent chapter! Can't wait to read the rest.
I know your story is complete, but I am only half way through it at the moment. I just wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying your writing. I've never laughed so hard. I can't wait to read it to the end and I look forward to reading more stuff from you. Thanks for the entertainment!!!
I know your story is complete, but I am only half way through it at the moment. I just wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying your writing. I've never laughed so hard. I can't wait to read it to the end and I look forward to reading more stuff from you. Thanks for the entertainment!!!
Hairann (Chapter 35) - Wed 11 Feb 2009
Amzing story Emma-chan, well worth the wait to read it :). Unique storyline, great character developement, all around exellent story from start to finish. 5/5 stars.
Dani (Chapter 35) - Thu 05 Feb 2009
I loved this so much! My eyes are falling out but I had to finish. This was the BEST ever!
Such a very fitting and poignant end.... Thank you for the wonderful tale, Emma. I have enjoyed this fic from beginning to end and it is one of the few that have made me run the full gauntlet of emotions.... BRAVO!
This has been one of the best fanfics that I have ever read. I thought that the whole concept was really original and I loved every chapter.
LC Rose (Chapter 35) - Tue 03 Feb 2009
Oh, em, I cannot even begin to tell you how much I have enjoyed this story. Wherever did the ideas for it come from?! You are a fantastic writer and the vivid imagery you use is so beautiful. I have loved every moment of it, longing for more whenever I managed to catch up, and not wanting the day to come when it would end. But all good things must... Wonderful job, again.
Gosh... I love this story so much. It's such a sucky review but I just don't have the capacity for words to express what your story makes me feel when I read it. I look forward to more.
Nobody (Chapter 33) - Tue 27 Jan 2009
i love it you did so well tieing up the lose ends its awesome!
Anonymous (Chapter 1) - Fri 16 Jan 2009
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Congratulations Emmaren — your story Yellow Brick Road has been nominated for Best Darkfic/Horror at the Inuyasha FanGuild for the Fourth Quarter of 2008!
This is only the first step in the process though—all nominations have to be seconded in order to reach voting. Furthermore, each nominated story must pass a careful screening process in order to make certain that all stories nominated at the IYFG meet our standards for technical quality. In the event that your story is disqualified for technical reasons, the IYFG offers resources to help you make improvements so that you can appeal the disqualification and have the nomination of your story reinstated. These resources include a Grammar Guide (posted on our website) of helpful hints and common mistakes, as well as a newly created Beta Group to assist you in making any changes you wish to make. You are in no way obligated to use these resources, but they’re here for anyone who is interested.
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Possessed (Chapter 32) - Thu 15 Jan 2009
I'm so glad Michi and Kuro will get their happy ending! I really liked those two characters...
Ashes (Chapter 31) - Thu 15 Jan 2009
Wow, Kagome sounds like a less evil version of my mother. Cool? hehe. It's really neat how you didn't just end the story with, well, the ending. I've noticed that a lot of authors only develope the story till Sesshoumaru and Kagome are together forrever, yay [insert pink hearts here]. I like how you're going beyond that.
Kagome's wisdom warms the heart. Thank you for sharing.
Dewa mata
Nobody (Chapter 31) - Thu 15 Jan 2009
aw i loved it, its so nice to see them after everything.
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