Wow, that got dark fast towards the end. But it IS a darkfic. Loved this story soooo much. The lemons could use some work. It always felt like they started, then their minds would wander, paced increased, and poof it's done. I feel they'd be better if you stayed in the moment, the details, how she feels, he feels (physically, not several paragraphs about their thoughts that takes away from the moment). Definitely needed more specifics on the buildup and orgasm. There were also other parts that could've used more detail. One specifically was when they discovered she was having twins, and girls. Barely had a word about sesshomarus internal thoughts regarding the double whammy. Also, the size of kagomes belly, how far along she was, was often neglected. Things like that. Overall the story was fantastic, easy to follow, I FRIGGIN LOVED her random OZ statements. I got a kick outta that the whole way through. Lol! Honestly. Well done. Keep it up!

Awwe!!

Omg I love it!!! Except, one question, I thought the water breaks and THEN comes the pain a while later...? I've never given birth so maybe there are exceptions, I was just curious because I thought it odd. Lol. 

Why you kill shippo?.   I hate when writers take it on the poor fox kid.  A kid what wrong with you people, kids should be sharrish not kill.

wonderful story!

I hate rin she is naive little twit somebody kill ol kiss ass

Amazing story!  Blew my mind.  I'm am so happy that it was completed.  Thank you!  Loved it.

So sad that at the end they o ly survive the pass of time no in mortality is worth all the suffering.  But then tear love was worth it.  Second time a read this story love it...

Wow is all I have to say after reading this... I brought so many emotions.... Congrats????????????????????????????????????????????????

awesome story. thank you!

Your story is bold, lined with personal wisdom, and an example of beauty found in one of the many niches of creation. I believe my favorite part was the epilogue chapters, and I usually hate the conclusions of stories that I get attached to. Thank you for giving me the privelege of reading your work. Magnificently done!

I love this story!! They went through a lot but got their happy ending! I couldn't beleive how Sango acted, it was rather shocking for me because I've never read anything where she acted like that but it worked out and you made work well into the story. I loved all the wizard of oz references and this story was just a fantastic journey!

This definitely did not disappoint. I was heartbroken at first by what Kagome suffered through but the end was worth the pain.

Thanks for the awesome story :)

I've only read the first chapter of this story and I love it so much already.  

This line in particular "...knowing that his Kagome had never truly existed. No, it had always been Kagome, human pinball for the Kami and Fate that he had known, and that he knew now."

I can't wait to read all the rest of the chapters 

Now to read the rest and/or until I fall asleep on the laptop! :)

dud i dont get the 1st  chapters??? but it seems like a good story :D

Wow.

This was amazing! Emmaren, you are truly a wonder! Great job, this was an excellent story, and I'm so glad I was able to stumble upon it.

T-T  I just spent the last few hours re-reading this...  *sniffle*  very good story

I don't know if i reviewed this after i read it the first time, but this is an amazing story, so sad and angsty (which i'm a huge fan of) I also couldn't help but find endless amounts of amusement in Kagome's craziness, and I can't help but agree that there are indeed times when the mind works in mysterious ways.

Anywho wonderful story!

I really enjoyed this fic. It was wonderfully written from start to finish. I kept a tab open so I could keep reading it these past few days. Keep up the good work <3

I liked it! I am so glad I decided to read it to the very end. I was seriously thinking that this story was going to make no sense whatsoever. But thankfully it did! =^.^= It was a pleasure to read this~