I enjoyed reading this. And you're right, it was just right without having to share what went on during the week, since that isn't the focus of the story. 

Interesting... though a little fast even for a whirlwind romance. Anyway, still very nice.

The story was amazing.

Great fic.  However, I did find it very distracting that some Japanese words are italicized, while other are not.  I would recommend not italicizing the Japanese, as you have also chosen italics to represents characters' thoughts; it can be a bit confusing.

Just came across this story... Love it!

Great one shot. I liked it a lot. Great work.

lol the end was cute with the sitting of inuyasha loved the story

This was very well written and entertaining. Great job!

Love it...Love it...Love it!!!!!

One of the best stories! It felt ike 20 chapters, but I enjoyed all of it ;]

Definitely something I'll be reading for the next 2 months, over and over.

I hope when he said; "Now, you are mine forever." meant that her life had been extended to his.  Otherwise I don't like the idea of a youkai/human mating if the youkai is going to only have them a few years and suffering while the human ages and finally passes away.  Then they suffer even more without their mate.  Also, the human suffers as they age and if there are children, the human mate knows they will be gone before the children are fully grown.  So more heartfelt agony.  Why bother?

Otherwise, I very much enjoyed reading this.  I think you did the right thing by not including scenes of her back with his pack and in the future together since this is a one-shot.  It would have been too much.  If you had made it into a chapter story, that would have been different.

Hi! I think the story in good enough for some light reading, but the plot of Sesshoumaru falling deeply in love with Kagome and mates her within a night is bit on the thin side.

Very well written!  I like that you put the little extra bit of plot in, with the Boar and Snake Youkai...that really made it more real, instead of just, "Kagome is alone in a cave with Sesshomaru and they fall in love and live happily ever after".

However, I think this one-shot would have been better as a multi-chapter fic...since there is so much going on! 

It's not "boring" by any means, but in some areas, it seemed kind of rushed.  But overall my dear, a wonderful fic!

Well done!

~Sakuramaru~

Truly amazing, you have such great talent, that is one of the best stories I have ever read.

I am in awe of your talent!!!! :D

A SINGULARLYORFEOUS STORY! THANK YOU! DON'T STOP WRITING!