Reviews for A Craigslist Romance by Tal

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L-desu (Chapter 11) - Sun 19 Sep 2010

hey, great chapter, and i'm sorry you're feeling out of sorts.  hopefully our love will drive away all the impurities!  get well soon!


Velvet Sometimes (Chapter 11) - Sun 19 Sep 2010

i luff this story tal! i cant wait for you to update again. i've got it on my watch list and in my favorites. ^^ i squell with fangirl pleasure when ever i see you've put a new chapter up.


Anonymous (Chapter 10) - Sun 19 Sep 2010

Whoa! She's REALLY powerful! Tal, this is really fun!


Naraku (Chapter 10) - Sat 18 Sep 2010

The sick one should post another update for this sick one.. -nods to this.-

 

I likes the story-ness btw. <3


Silverwing (Chapter 10) - Sat 18 Sep 2010

Aaaaawwwwww poor Rin! And I like that Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru get along, relatively. Thanks for the update!


jgem (Chapter 10) - Sat 18 Sep 2010

Very intriguing storyline, especially with Rin being a little bit of a spoiled child and also being a miko. 

Also, each of your chapters are long enough to get the plot advanced but you don't get any of the disjointedness that some drabbles can cause.

 

Keep it up!

 


m. (Chapter 9) - Sat 18 Sep 2010

lmao. wickedly cute, i would love to ask for more asap but feel better first. Im suffering from the change in weather too so i completely understand.get well soon =]


Brenna (Chapter 9) - Fri 17 Sep 2010

Tal! I love your story, its rather entertaining so far!!!! Keep writing :)


tiana (Chapter 9) - Fri 17 Sep 2010

haha that waz funny update soon plz and i lik where thiz iz headed


Jo (Chapter 4) - Fri 17 Sep 2010

*snicker* I like the phrase "smacked down". Even if it was just Sesshy testing and Kagome rebuffing.

I am glad to see that she is well trained in this story. A welcome relief from the ever-doubting self-conscious hardly-trained miko of canon.

 


Jo (Chapter 9) - Fri 17 Sep 2010

Oh ho ho! Jaken's in for it now!

Way to go Kagome!

~*~

It's new to see Rin as a sulking child. I didn't think that she was capable of it. However, since this is an AU, and she wasn't (I'm assuming) re-animated by Sesshoumau, she may have had a less traumatic life before him. Meaning, she would have the luxury to sulk before.

I do like the reasoning for why she isn't so peachy about her powers. I am glad that it looks like Kagome has successfully won over both the father and the adoptive daughter.

I really like how Miroku and Kagome both applied for the same job. That tied in quite nicely.

I was rather worried that Rin's awakening powers may have possibly caused Sesshoumaru discomfort. Is that why they cannot touch? I was actually thinking that was the reason, and that Kagome would tell Rin that if her powers were controlled, Rin would be able to tackle her father again.

Then again - I like the pranking more.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Thank you for the story.


Rowdys girl (Chapter 9) - Fri 17 Sep 2010

LOL! Evil child!


*cathstar (Chapter 9) - Fri 17 Sep 2010

Rin is turning out to be a little devil! >8D I love it. Aww, and get better soon! I hate getting sick! :( 


tiana (Chapter 8) - Thu 16 Sep 2010

hahaha that waz funny cant wait to c watz nxt

 


Rowdys girl (Chapter 8) - Thu 16 Sep 2010

Don't we all dream of having a friend who gives us free booze? LOL! I'm really enjoying this, Tal. And, yes, Rin IS cute!


Rowdys girl (Chapter 7) - Thu 16 Sep 2010

hmmm, didja have to put Jaken in the story??? He's so annoying! Anyway, it's your story and you should write it your way with the characters you choose. It's just...Jaken? I like the little turn, where Rin isn't particularly happy to have Miko powers.


Yohko (Chapter 7) - Thu 16 Sep 2010

NICE START! Keep it coming! :D


*cathstar (Chapter 7) - Thu 16 Sep 2010

Macho, macho man! I wanna be a macho man! I assume that's the song you're referring to? Or perhaps the Nacho Man commercial from the nineties? Either way, they're hilarious. 


Tangerine Dream (Chapter 7) - Wed 15 Sep 2010

Well frankly this wasn't much of a penance to pay but I'm glad you made me pay it! This was such a wonderful read and made me giggle so hard I got weird looks from my turtle! I love you characterizations of Sesshomaru (and hte Jaken comment) as well as Rin beign unhappy (not that I like her being unhappy) because I think in that situation she woudl be grumpy about it. I thoutgh the little Souta snippet was halarious as my older brother plays embarrassing music too loud when I least need it as well >//////////////< poor 'gome. Lol. It is a very good mix of humor and a bit of sarcasim (or perhaps snarkyness on sesshomaru side, either way it starts with an s wether it is snarky or sarcastic). I shall continue payign my penace as you update as it is my duty to do so (thats a lie I just really liek this *gigglesnort*). THanks for writing and can't wiat for more and to see hwo Rin reacts and all that in a box of cereal!

~Her Tangyness (appearently as thats what dany calls me)


Tsuki (Chapter 7) - Wed 15 Sep 2010

Aww poor Rin doesn't like her powers :( Hopefully she'll warm up to Kagome tho :D


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