ooh, I'd like to hear what Kagome has planned...

hmmm...interested to see where this will go :D

OMG what awful parents!  At least Kagome can seek retribution for that indecency.  

You're doing a wonderful job with this, I'm very much enjoying it.  Keep up the great work!

oh pleasepleasePLEASE LET US SEE HOW SHE TORTURES THEM!

poor Rin! I'm surprised Sesshomaru didn't anonymously hire humans to kill Rin's bio-donors.

anyway PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Fun little story!

This fic is sooo freakin cute!  I love it.  Keep updating! ^_____^

ZOMG! THis is so adorable! The last sentence made me feel so warm and fuzzy inside! This is an overall great story! Keep it up!

-LavB<3

good job

Ah, so Inu got burne as well hm? I'm glad to see that he was a good sport about it.

And that was what they were doing with the flowers? That is very clever!

"What family is like" hmm? Hehehee. That's a fortune told.

Thank you for the chapter! It's a sweet story. And cheeky.

Oh, Tal, I love this chapter. It's so heartrendingly sweet. Rin really just longs for a family, a whole family. So good!

I'll admit, I was skeptical when I read "Craigslist" in the description, but this is really fun and cute. I like it a lot! Kagome's got sass and for once didn't moon over Sesshoumaru within thirty seconds of meeting him.

Very refreshing story!

C.Nichole

I just love it when my husband gives me "the eyebrow". And giggling maniacally over your fic drew one.

I, too, love seeing Kagome holding her own against all comers. And Inuyasha got what he deserved for jumping to conclusions. <wg> More please!!!

hahahahaha that waz hilarious nice job update soon plz

O ho ho!

Inuyasha cannot fault Kagome for being weak or untrained! Frozen and down for the count and helpless to boot. Excellent turn about. It's just wonderful to see Kagome with confidence, poise, and power.

I am curious to see what they were doing with the flowers! Maybe the next story will tell us?

Thank you so much for the update!

*Laughing belly laughs* Oh, Inuyasha needs to learn to keep his nose out of other's business! LOL! I love this Kagome. She takes no prisoners and no shit!

I hope you're feeling better now. Don't stay up so late at night and get more sleep, Kid!

good stuff

Okay, you have some work to do; this sentence didn't make sense so I've made some suggestions:

When they were beginning meditation, however, she helped Rin to discover her own aura[,]; Rin [was] became a believer, especially when she saw how wild it was.

This is so cute, Kagome teaching Rin how to purify Jaken, these are the things that sweet childhood memories are made of.

I love it, Tal! Sesshoumaru got burned by his baby girl! Poor Inuyasha, always a crude guy but at least you're letting him have a heart of gold!

This is superb! Really sweet and cute and just overall adorable! Keep it up!

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I had to be up early, so I had no choice but to leave. ;3; Thank yew though~