Regarding my previous review.  I know I was pretty tough on Sesshoumaru.  I know personally how a person can turn on those around him when he loses someone close to him in death.   I can sympathize but it still doesn't make me like the way he's treating her.  I know he wants her strong.  Most people succeed at something through encouragement.  She was not nervous or scared in the presence of her guard so she was relaxed and confident enough to succeed.  Some people, the more you intimidate them, the more they will fail.  I have confidence that Kagome is going to succeed through her anger probably and a wish to protect her guard.

Also, I will take back that he's cruel to his people.  It just seems he so cold to them and that's probably to hide any of his emotions from them but a lot of youkai seem to be emotional.  He's hurting right now which would make him even colder probably.  Still to me it seems cruel to abuse one of his subjects just to accomplish something from someone else.

I really like this plot and the fact that it seems to get me emotionally involved in the characters and what you are doing with them.  Stories like this get my juices to flowing so keep those fingers dancing on those keys.

Outstanding chapter!  I truly enjoy this story and you are doing a fantastic job writing it. I love the way you take your time to develop the story line and you have captured what it must feel like in the youkai court.

Glad to see the update and can't wait for more, more more!

I am soo happy that you've updated again. This is one of my favourite stories; you write beautifully. I had a little fit when the newest chapter ended and now my boyfriend thinks that i'm a little weird. I can't wait for the next update so please don't keep us waiting long.

Cheers,

Acadia

I am so not liking Sesshoumaru.  What sympathy I had for him in the beginning is completely gone.  Kagome was so innocent in helping him and he's such a cold hearted bastard by taking out his frustrations, hate, and loss of Rin out on her.  I also believe him to be cruel in the way he treats his people.  I'm eager for the next update to see how she finally manages to overcome her fear and nerves (caused by him) to save her guard.  Hopefully some of the fallout will land on Sesshoumaru.

I, too, like a slow romance.  Especially with a setting like this.  They hate each other, so you can't expect them to fall in love in the next few chapters.  With their relationship, it's going to take a while.

I hope she's successful in getting away.  At least to get to Shippo so she can have him with her and heal him and the others will know whats going on. 

Rin's ghost needs to take a real good look at her beloved Sesshoumaru and the way he's behaving.

 Kagome Yuki Niwa,

 Again you did another outstanding chapter do keep the good work coming in. If you ever need ay suggestions or help give a hoot to me. I wanna see more ASAP. Update again real soon.

Great update!  I had forgotten about this story!

Keep the chapters coming!

i think that if you havent got the plunnie for it yet her control should be based on the fact that she doenst have a full soul. i cant see  you really controlling a power like that with a lack of a full soul. and hardly any training.

I kinda dont like rin, and right now while i understand sess i hate him.... s oooo... yeah....

BUT this was a good udpate, kidna sad for the gaurd but :\

Do update this is looking good. Well Ic with Sesshomaru and the lot I like to see more when updated.

huray and up date man

I wonder why Rin has not shown herself to Sesshoumaru in his dreams?  He seems to be the one who needs her advice the most...

Lovely. I cannot wait to see how the two come tohether in this one. Your style is a good one, and wish to seemore of it. I'll be sure to stay on top of this story. Do your best!

I love this!

You've captured Sesshomaru-sama very well. (:

Again, I apologize for the mistake of review posting.

Please update soon!

- Vou

That last review... was for a different story. I am reading this right now and shall leave a review for the actual story. ^^;

Sorry.

I-I am so irked with that cliffhanger Aura-san! >____<'

Do update soon!

And happy Holidays! :D

Your #1 Reader (next to R00),

Vou

Fantastic story and very engaging. Sounds like she has valuable allies but needs to prove herself in a few days. Meanwhile, it seems that Inuyasha is planning her rescue: what will she do if he turns up at the gate? An where is Myoga? He seems to turn up at the most interesting times....

Very Well done, I really hope she does leave the west, and then goes away, LOL not in a bad way but find her own idenity and stuff, besides Sesshomaru is extreamly Angery, so she needs to get away form  him, and there for...... let him chase her LOL there is nothing better than a good chase LOL.

I hope you update real soon, and don't change a thing it is good.

Hugs

Megan007

Rin's being a bit unfair from the grave dont you think maybe she should haunt Sess he's being an arse... both of them are a bit too um.. spoiled? -nods- that's about right....

more updates!

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!MORE!!!!..... I NEED MORE...IM A JUNKIE to this story....PLS!!!!!!!!!!

Great so far. i personally think that you kept sesshomaru in character perfectly. (the way i think he would act anyway). Cant wait for your next update