Breathlessly waiting for more chapters. You're doing a good job.
So to start off, I have no idea how I have not read this story till now. It doesn't seem possible that something this good was here and I was not immersed since the first chapter.
Second thing, while I know this is good ol' Dokuga, I can't help but desperately hope Kagomes and Takeshi end up together and actually have that blue eyed obsidian pup. I think I would fall over and die! You've portraid him so well, given him such depth and emotion that I couldnt help but fall I love with him!
I love how you made Srsshoumaru actually regal, how you captured, what was essentially, how lord/ kings actually acted in those days. Not so unbearably stiff that the were nothing more then merceless killing dictators, as everyone likes to make them out. Big also did not make him a complete 180 and make him a simpering fool in love. Love had very little to do with that.
And let's get to the lady of the hour. I am smitten with the kagone you created! She is refined, yet still humourous, She is hard when it counts but still soft and excepting. She is what a woman should be strong, resultant, willing to fight for her friends and family, the people that matter.
I hope to see an update soon, and I will probably make some strangled, chocking sound when i get notified that will make my pudding Pop wonder if I am dying.
ps. If you're not of fanfictoon.net, please go there and make a story of just kagome and takeshi. my poor little heart can't bear for them to not get together in some universe!
Best regards,
TIO'
Lol. More please. I've always been here waiting faithfully.
I'm all caught up...sigh. Now I have to wait for updates. While I do love your crazy long chapters, if you update sooner with shorter ones, I'll be very happy. This is a terrific story. Can't wait to hear how the raid goes. Cheers!
Kudos on all the awards! Well deserved! This is a kick Burt, lots of drama and take no prisoners story! One more chapter and I'm all caught up. Just loving it.
Another awesome chapter. Kags held her own against the conniving Ladies and the Obsidian Inu's. Damn ruthless to throw your youngest out as bait. I guess he didn't figure she could take him on. A few sweet moments with Sessh (TYVM) and Takeshi. Love the visual of Ah-Un wiggling his happiness to see her. Okay I have one whine, I ride horses. Reins are used to control some of the movements of the horses head And are attached to a bit and bridle. Reign is what a ruler does, Sessh reigns over the Western Lands. Sorry that one and the bear/bare one just make me nuts. Okay nazi grammar rant is done.
Freaking awesome chapter! Points to Kagome for besting Cerdwin. Held my breathe for Kohaku and loved the interplay between Takeshi and Akihiro. Thanks so much!
Nice chapters. Seeds planted everywhere. Love Himeno.
More interesting background and now mama Inu. Nice. Great chapter.
Puzzles within puzzles and now this mystery about the Killing Perfection. So good. Can't race through this, you'll miss something essential. Great storytelling lady.
Fabulous chapter! Loved her mom snd Inuyasha time, sneak peaks into Takeshi's thoughts, damn Sessh!... it took four of them to take your mind off of Kags?? That was just awesome. Oh and that wench Reika has been moved on down the road. Yeah I know, not for long. And Naraku is back...oh joy! Great story with so many twists and turns.
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