I CAN'T BELIEVE ITS OVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SUCH AN AMAZING STORY, FANTASTIC JOB, YOU'RE AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Just a little confused, wasn't the well closed?
Ch. 3 : "She went on like that for a while, ranting on and on about how the well was closed and she had nothing to do. About an hour later though, Kagome found his hand clamped over her mouth once again."
I guess it might have reopened and you just didn't mention it?
Nice story, I like it a lot. Cute prompt for Valentine's Day, too!
~Daedal
TKE (Chapter 26) - Mon 14 Feb 2011
Sooooo didn't see that coming! I like it!
Sophie (Chapter 26) - Mon 14 Feb 2011
I missed you! I'm so happy with the new part and hope there soon be more to follow. Keep it up and make at least one more person happy :)
amy (Chapter 25) - Sat 01 Jan 2011
THANK YOU FOR A FABULOUS STORY, DON'T STOP NOW! IF YOU NEED A BETA READER SIGN ME UP!
Glad to see you back! Nice chapter Lass!
I don't see any mistake in there, but hey! I'm French, so... I could have missed a few ;p
Inuyasha needs a good spanking though... >D
Happy New Year!
Dewa mata
Snowfall (Chapter 24) - Sun 07 Nov 2010
OMG! I didn't know that scent had a name! *squeals* I love that scent. This is a nice little story and I cringe when Kagome tells everyone what she has done. >.< I hope they don't take it too badly.
I love that word "petrichor" I wonder how you stumbled across it? I love it when people step outside of the ordinary and introduce new interesting words. As for the rest of the words in this chapter, lovely but there are only 106 of them. Not nearly enough. Sigh. I must be satisfied with your spendour in small doses. Thankyou, I liked it very much.
Wow, I have got to give you MAJOR KUDOS! Not only has this series been intriguing, but you have managed, despite the title and the subject matter, to keep the T rating with which you began!! It is incredibly difficult to realistically portray the blossoming love and affection, segue to a mating, and still keep it to a less than M rating. For that alone, I commend you! The fact that you have done this within the confines of drabble-length chapters, and done so with these characters so believably, just furthers my admiration for your writing prowess. Thanks so much for gracing us with this beautiful collection!
:D
~~Wiccan~~
Melly (Chapter 24) - Sun 07 Nov 2010
Holy cow. I just read the entire story now and I LOVE IT! There are a few typos in each chapter, but you have wonderful storytelling ability. Please update soon!! New favorite!
Oh! I loved these two chapters. The relationship you create between these two is so flowing; one takes, the other gives, and vice versa. I love it!
Saholia (Chapter 23) - Tue 12 Oct 2010
OMGosh I love this fic so much so far! You're doing a wonderful job! Keep it up :D
It was nice to see an update! :) keep up the good work - I can't wait till the lovebirds finally get down to it, LOL!
He's been very patient with her and her wishes but wants her to be his mate. I don't think it fair of her to make him suffer through mating season without being able to take her as his. I know she's timid but what is two more months going to give her except to keep putting off the inevitable. He may start to get the feeling she doesn't really want to be with him completely.
MATING SEASON! w0o0o0o0o0o0o!!
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