and just think: if Sesshomaru had been his usual logic over emotions type stance after seeing what he did or even simply went HOME to drink he wouldn't have been anywhere NEAR that harlet and this extra issue wouldn't exist. *rolls eyes* Really... I'm more still disappointed in Sesshomaru because it's not something that should have ever happened with his personality imho. Oh... I can SEE why and how it happened... objectively and from a certain angle... I just don't feel quite right about it. Especially with his previous opinion of Kikyo. I mean... a random stranger would have made more sense.
yeah... I'm back on that again. *makes face* Probably will be for a while.
gah.
oh... little error fix: "Her postured sagged" just "posture" is enough. "postured" is something different. Easily mistake even for English speaking natives.
All in all I'm glad to see some more light and HOPE in this story again. The last few chapters have been rather draining to read. *wry grin* Seeing as I read to escape unhappiness in real life I really don't handle the more stressful situations well so the getting around and past the little problems is a huge thing. I'm really glad Kagome's seen how Sesshomaru is and will be truthful to her. I feel that's a HUGE step with what happened. That... and his was only a very minor indiscretion in the scope of things. *crinkles nose* It's more WHO it was with than anything.
Still have a huge problem with that. *sighs* Puckernuts, but it's really driving me crazy. *bangs head on desk to try and clear it*
Hopefully the next chapter continues on the up and up!
Thanks for writing!
AHHH
Your updates are always so amazing..
and always leave me wanting more.. update soon!
YAY AN UPDATE! I loveeeeee this story :) The angst kills me sometimes but i love it anyhow! Good Job can't wait for the next one :)
Paige (Chapter 19) - Tue 22 Mar 2011
Thank you for the update!
Finally some happiness in this story! ;D
I hope to read more soon!
Please Update soon. What is in that letter? I cant wait to find out what it is. The suspence is killing me. So please update. I love it so far.
Well... Considering everything that happened I suppose that is the best way to try and work through the tangled skein. *headdesks* Still hurts to read though. *pouts* Hm... I wonder if Kagome will look at the surveillance tapes or simply trust Sesshomaru on this? It's 50/50 the way I see it, since she doesn't have her memories of learning to trust him -only her feelings.
Now... I'm looking forward to finding out what's in that letter... ;)
Thanks for writing!
Oh my goodness!! I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm so glad they got things cleared up!
mika (Chapter 18) - Tue 01 Mar 2011
I love your story. I can't get enough of it, and I can't wait to see what happens next.
anne (Chapter 18) - Tue 01 Mar 2011
Suicide letter? She tried to kill herself and he found the letter? Hope not.
Thank you for updating. OMG!!! I can't wait to find out what's in the letter!!! Are we finally gonna find out what happened that day when she found out about Inuyasha & Kikyo???
Mikaila (Chapter 18) - Mon 28 Feb 2011
Why did Sess leave? Who wrote the letter? I'm so confused! I'm happy that they finally talked, I want them to get back together. Please update soon!
Dragoness (Chapter 18) - Mon 28 Feb 2011
Oh wow. An update already I am soooo happy. I can't wait to see what is in the letter. I hope she doesn't need to see the survilence footage but at least it's there for her to show how much a liar Kikyou is. Inuyasha needs to get lost. I so love this story. I can't wait for the next update.
moonsofsaturn (Chapter 1) - Mon 28 Feb 2011
This chapter was a bit of a relief to see the hope again, especially with the mysterious letter. I love to read your stories, especially this one and Blood Stained!The plots are well thought and suspenseful to keep me waiting for the next update. Please continue writing! (my apologies for not reviewing sooner...your work deserves it) :)
meh.... this doesn't help! *pouts* But... st least Sesshomaru mostly stopped things. Still hard to believe he let Kikyo into his bedroom...
meh. Too much angst/pain/drama. owie.
Thanks for writing.
Connie (Chapter 17) - Tue 22 Feb 2011
noooo man up sesshoumaru!!!
OMG I almost had a heart-attack, but thank goodness! You are somehting else you! Very mischeivious! <3 BTW loving this story (obviously) You're awesome! and keep the chapters coming I want to know if Sesshoumaru confronts her or not OR if she confronts him!
Dragoness (Chapter 17) - Tue 22 Feb 2011
OMG!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you for not putting this on the back burner. I live for both stories they are both so wonderful I can't even pick a favorite. Of course we love this story too. The only reason I don't hound you about updating is because I know we all have lives outside of dokuga but please don't think it's not because I don't want to. And the last chapter I just kept thinking NOOOOO! Sesshomaru please don't! But I held off hoping to God he would not go through with it. I am SOOOO happy he stopped and now if they could just talk. The misunderstanding on both of their parts could ruin them. That can't happen. Inuyasha needs to get hit by a trackter. Can't wait for the next update. Wink,wink. I am sure no one would be opposed to you updating daily.Wink,wink.
OMG. You.. are.. EVIL!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
SESSHIE WHY!!!
NOOOOO
sigh
Very well written chapter though. Its very well done. But... Sesshie's so... AUGHHGGG
angerrr (Chapter 17) - Tue 22 Feb 2011
second review ever. i swear, your story will be the only one ill ever review. just because i want to rip kikyo and inuyasha apart. and really sesshoumaru. REALLY? ahhh. so much tension and sooooo much frustration. i hope to god next chapter will come through for me because the past two have been too much for me!
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