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Lisa (Chapter 6) - Sat 16 Sep 2017

I think Kagome is at fault too after all she is gone for months at a time doing a job Sesshoumaru dose'nt know about. She has all this money and cars hidden that he dose not know about. When she is asked about it she wan't tell him were it came from or how she got it. I think most men would have left her all together a long time ago. I think he should have,


Sessygurl (Chapter 6) - Sun 10 Sep 2017

I think he was drugged fron the start. She is working with Naraku. It only makes sense. Or Sesshoumaru beast will take over and kill Kikyho and mate Kagome. I do not think it will be able to take so much dishonor.


Alashia (Chapter 1) - Fri 08 Sep 2017

Nice story.


InuKami-Sama (Chapter 4) - Fri 08 Sep 2017

I'm trying to like this but it's to much OOC and fast...I don't think I can continue unless it's redone sorry :/


Mona (Chapter 6) - Fri 08 Sep 2017

I hope they get a divorce and Kagome finds happiness with someone else.  I really do not want them to end up together again because it would be a huge disappointment and would be a fic similar to other.


teresa daniel (Chapter 6) - Fri 08 Sep 2017

HI, SO FAR STORY IS INTERESTING....BUT I WOULD CERTAINLY HOPE YOU DONT HAVE KAGOME GO BACK TO HIM...ONCE A CHEATER ,ALWAYS A CHEATER.....AND KAGS DONT NEED THAT CRAPPY  NO GOOD CHEATER...SHE DESERVES BETTER THAN THAT...BUT SINCE KAGS IS AN ASSASSIN.....I THINK SHE NEEDS TO ASSASSINATE KIKYO...SO THE SLUTTY WHORE CANT CHEAT NO MORE OR CAUSE HER ANYMORE GRIEF.....BUT SESSHOUMARU NEEDS TO PAY ALSO.....I WOULD DIVORCE HIM ,NEVER LET HIM SEE THE KIDS AND HAVE PAPA INU MAKE THE PUPS HIS HEIRS AND NOT SESSHOUMARU.....PAPA INU SHOULD DISINHERIT SESSHOUMARU....GIVE HIS WHOLE INHERITANCE TO HIS AND KAGS PUPS AND LEAVE SESS OUT IN THE COLD ,MAYBE EVEN FIRE HIM FROM THE FIRM. HAVE KAGS AND HER TWIN KILL THERE PARENTS AND KIKYO. HAVE THEM TORTURE AND KILL KIKYO AT A SECRET PLACE AND DEATROY THE BODY WITH ACID SO THERE IS NO EVIDENCE TO BE FOUND..AND HAVE KAGS FIX THEIR PARENTS CAR SO THERE IS NO WAY TO TELL IT HAS BEEN TAMPERED WITH,AND HAVE THEM KILLED IN AN ACCIDENT TOGETHER AND HAVE THE CASE CLOSED AS AN ACCIDENT. THAT WAY THE TWIN SISTERS CAN RAISE THE SIBLINGS AND KAGOMES TWIN PUPS TOGETHER IN THE COUNTRY SOMEWHERE SINCE KAGOME HAS MULTIPLE RESIDENCES IN JAPAN, AFRICA, AMERICA, SOUTH AMERICA, AUSTRALIA, AND EUROPE. THEY COULD HAVE SOMEONE RUN THE BUSINESSES FOR THEM . THEY COULD CHANGE THEIR NAMES AND THE SIBLINGS NAMES AND RAISE THEM IN ANY OF THE OTHER COUNTRIES THAT THEY HAVE HOMES IN, OR SWITCH PLACES EVERY COUPLE YEARS TO KEEP ANY ONE FROM TRACKING THEM .....LIKE SESSHOUMARU.... SHE CAN STILL MAYBE LET INU PAPA KNOW WHERE SHE IS , SO HE CAN VISIT THEM IN SECRET...MAYBE USE HIS BUSINESS OR A VACATION AS HIS COVER TO VISIT HIS GRANDKIDS.....ALSO COME UP WITH A WAY TO MAKE IT SO KAGS AND HER SIBLINGS ARE IMMORTAL OR LONG LIFE LIKE YOUKAI SO THEY ARE ALWAYS THERE TO RAISE THE PUPS.....MAYBE MAKE IT SO THE KAMI BLESS THEM WITH IMMORTAL LIFE BECAUSE THEY ARE DESCENDENTS...OR HAVE THEM BLESSED WITH  ENORMOUS POWERS AND IMMORTALITY TO FIGHT EVIL....MAYBE EVEN THERE EVIL PARENTS.....I WOULD LIKE TO SEE SOMEONE GIVE THEM THE POWER TO (TALK TO ANIMALS AND CONTROL THEM) ,ELEMENTAL POWERS OVER FIRE,WATER, EARTH (TO GROW OR CONTROL ALL PLANT LIFE ) AIR/WIND ( TO RIDE ON WIND CURRENTS OR CLOUDS) LIKE SESSHOUMARU RIDES A YOUKAI CLOUD IN THE SERIES. ALSO MAYBE GIVE THEM POWERS OF TELEPATHY (TO SPEAK TO /OR CONTROL OTHERS, AND TELEKENESIS (ABLE TO MOVE AND CONTROL THE MOVEMENTS)OF OBJECTS. THESE POWERS AND THE IMMORTALITY CAN BE GIFTS GIVEN TO THEM AND THERE KIDS BY THE KAMI AS A WAY TO TRY AND MAKEUP FOR THERE TORTURED LIFE AND BECAUSE THEY STILL STAYED PURE OF HEART. YOU CAN EVEN HAVE IT THAT KIKYO WAS WORKING FOR HER PARENTS TO DESTROY KAGOME  AND TRY TO TAINT THE TWINS PURE HEART,,,,, SO THAT THEY COULD TRY TO TURN THEM EVIL,AND FORCE THEM TO DO EVIL FOR THEM BY TRYING TO CONTROL THEM.... WITH A MIST SPRAY LIKE WHAT WAS USED ON SESSHOUMARU....MADE BY KIKYO OR NARAKU.....BUT HAVE THEM DEFEAT NARAKU AND THEN TORTURE AND KILL KIKYO FOR TRYING TO FINISH WHAT NARAKU WAS PLANNING TO DO TO THEM AND THE SIBLINGS.


Natalia (Chapter 6) - Fri 08 Sep 2017

Good idea but it needs work. First of all a beta and second so many of characters that can't keep track of them and what is happening. It's just a pet peeve of mine to use Japanese names in a Japanese fic, this is not 1001 nights. Too many different directions of the fic and not serious enough communication papi? He is respectable youkai lord not your average father and I am so sorry this is my opinion strictly and no offence meant but everyone's behaviour seems illogical and like this fic is rushed and told not shown. More details please, and please find a beta for the errors so we can enjoy the flow even better, your story will only get better! I wish you good luck! Keep writing!


Melody Vengeance (Chapter 5) - Sat 02 Nov 2013

please continue it i love it so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Seraphina Dragon (Chapter 5) - Tue 30 Jul 2013

Please keep updating please


lujan (Chapter 1) - Mon 16 Jan 2012

I'm just going to be very blunt here. This needs major work. To reiterate another reviewer, there are far too many things going on. I highly suggest pulling this story and focusing on one aspect because the way you're going, this is going to be a major trainwreck. And what's with the whole throwing in twenty different characters? Probably something to do with one of the many plots you've got going on. I can hardly keep track of all of them. And what's with the OC? Did you forget about Sango? And the secret agent BS? And "Inu Papa" calling her little one? So weird. 

This needs work. Find yourself a beta, a sounding board, a second pair of eyes before this story crashes and burns. Throwing a whole mess of ideas into one story is the classice rookie mistake. 


raindancer13 (Chapter 5) - Mon 16 Jan 2012
Of course it's not going to go well for you, you traitorous bastard! I hope Inu papa skewers Sess alive!

Brenda (Chapter 4) - Mon 03 Oct 2011

I have to say it takes alot to really impress me, let alone give feedback. But your story has alot of promise and I'm hoping you will update it to it's completion. But for now I'll take it as it comes so please update and continue what your doing! :D


RubyJeweler (Chapter 4) - Sun 02 Oct 2011

YAY! I think I was able to fix my browser now. That means that I can review! *JUMPS IN JOY* Anyway, I like your story so far, and I would love to read more. (:


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DemonQueen17 (Chapter 4) - Thu 29 Sep 2011

There's only one thing for Inuyasha to do and that is to relinquish his claim on Kikyou, pack all her things and kick her out of his life and fire her ass on top of that. Perhaps he can be with Fatima if she's not mated already. Just a thought. Looking forward to the next chapter.


amy (Chapter 4) - Wed 01 Jun 2011

Please finish this fic, I want to see Sesshy beg for his wife, the assassin!


crin_fausta (Chapter 4) - Sat 19 Mar 2011

This story is amazing, awesome but please...find a beta...You have lots of spelling mistakes and it's a shame as this story has lots of potential!

You can find a beta on dokuga's forum...

Can't wait to read the next chapter!


crin_fausta (Chapter 4) - Sat 19 Mar 2011

This story is amazing, awesome but please...find a beta...You have lots of spelling mistakes and it's a shame as this story has lots of potential!

You can find a beta on dokuga's forum...

Can't wait to read the next chapter!


Lilith (Chapter 4) - Wed 26 Jan 2011

Thoughts and the story are a bit scattered, but otherwise enjoyable to read. I hope you update soon, and let me know with a PM. You have the makings of a good story, no need to rush. :) 


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