Skye, this is so perfect, each chapter is a jewel. I love the pace you've set for it, even though I am the Queen of Instant Gratification! LOL! I think you've 'coined' the dilema of meeting a someone from the past, one is curious about how that person has changed, who they've become, but that knowledge will color the memories...
One little, tiny thing: Daily, she would wake, [peak] peek out the window to see the sun
Sessygurl (Chapter 4) - Fri 27 Aug 2010
Was that Sango or Sesshomaru who hand was on her shoulder? This is getting good, I cant wait for another chapter, update soon
KitKat (Chapter 3) - Mon 23 Aug 2010
Beautifully written and I can't wait to read more! :D
Sessygurl (Chapter 2) - Fri 20 Aug 2010
I cant wait for the interaction between the two of them, was there something more there after he left
WAH! I love the soft rythm of this, rather like the waves on a lake. You paint a lovely background and the characters are slipping beautifully into place. I am looking forward to the next chapter...
Really good work, Skye.
Great chapter, Skye! The descriptions of summer were beautiful and the attention you paid to the tiny details made the story very realistic and enjoyable. And AHHHH Sesshoumaru sounds totally gorgeous from your descriptions - I can just imagine the silver of his hair catching glimmers of sunlight in it. Lovely! Now, I'm totally being greedy, but what we all need is...MORE! ^.^
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