And they finally meet. Ooh, I can't wait to see what happens.
Just a tiny correction, you probably hadn't noticed it.
"Daily, she would wake, peak out the window to see the sun gently climbing over the horizon and climb out of bed to start her day."
Should be "Daily, she would wake, peek out the window..."
The rest of it was as lovely as always, and I shall now move on to the next chapter. ^^
I hate it when people do things like that. :/ Thankfully, the damage wasn't too bad. It's a little sad that Kagome thinks Sesshy doesn't remember her, but hopefully things will work out. ^^
And we have a short look into Sesshomaru's thoughts on things. Very intriguing. ^^
Oooh. Very nice.
HA! I BEAT YOU UNIVERSE! I FINISHED THE FIRST CHAPTER. XD
This is lovely, Skye. You always write such pretty stories. I'm now going to move onto chapter 2. ^^
Skye, you may have struggled with this chapter, but it doesn't show. It is beautiful, well-written, concieved and constructed. You have my heart pumping now, what are you doing next?
I think you may have dropped the 's' at the beginning of this sentence:
[He] She had happily stored away the memories of him in the special little box in her head labelled with his name.
XD Yay! I really like this so far. ^_^
I'm loving this Skye! I can't wait to see what happens next. XD
janjan (Chapter 10) - Sat 20 Nov 2010
cant wait for next chapter!!
Wah! You've some very powerful writing here. I love the imagery of the castles and the colors on the hut, the way it blends with it's surroundings. You're really put some pictures in my head. The best is Sesshoumaru's stiffness, his unwillingness, and his inability to keep her out of his mind and heart. He's lost the battle already and won't admit it; but his pain is tangible. Good work, Skye.
:0 OMG AWESOME I loved it! And just so you know I kinda need more, but don't tell anyone, because I don't want to seeem to desperate (but really I am ver desperate). <3 Keep uo the awesome fic Skye!
Skye, you have a wonderful ability to intrigue and entwine your readers into a story. I am so loving these people you've written, dented and dinged by life... I can't wait to see if and how Kagome breaks through his icy walls!
Sessygurl (Chapter 7) - Sat 02 Oct 2010
Awww, I hope she suceeds
Awww poor Kaggie, Sessho's gonna leave and never come back.... or is he *sly look* Awesome job Miss Skye! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Wow Skye, this is a great story and I can't wait to see what happens next!! Keep up the awesome work!!! <3333333
L-desu (Chapter 6) - Sun 19 Sep 2010
yay for progress! loving how you're moving this along.
L-desu (Chapter 5) - Wed 08 Sep 2010
i like the slow progression that's taking place. wonder what will happen when they finally seek each other out. looking forward to the next update!
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