I really don't like this story. It's too much like rape even if her body does react to him. And the whole fact that the OOCness is insane. Just can't handle slutty bitch Kagome and rapist asshole Sesshoumaru. Rather depressing, really... :(
So far, I like your story. I think Kagome gave in awfully quickly, but the stress would be horrible on the pups.
I hope they are able to work things out with Kagome's mom. I figure after the pups are born - hard to say go away, when your grandchildren are right there.
I also look forward to the reunion with Shippo and Rin. How hard did Shippo take Kagome's leaving? Is he angry with her, or just grateful she's alive and well and he can see her again?
I like Mikio, so far. I'd like to see more character development there. What happened while he was captured? Will Kagome help him deal with it? Does he suffer post traumatic stress from the ordeal? Things like that.
i like this, though i dunno is her talk with her nephew what made her change her mind, or what shippo thought, or the relationship she wanted to have so that her kids didnt suffer for her misteaks?
awe Sesshomaru :[ he messed up now! *pulls hair* i really love this fic! *wiggles update bribery c0okie at you*
Diane (Chapter 8) - Fri 13 Aug 2010
Just to let you know you seem to have left something out at the end of the 3rd paragraph, it ends in the; She said as she laid her head down against the
LMAO " let them tell her! hahahahahaha
I dunno. I kinda get her feelings on the matter but at the same time she's still being a big baby and selfish. I still kinda hope that someone puts it into prospective what Sess had to deal with, not having her for 500 years.
awe Sesshomaru's so sweet! I love this chapter :3 i dunno i jsut want more! that's all i can really say ^_^
yus i think she deserves punishment. seriosuly i love kagome but she's being a lil bish. she wanted anyone other then inuyasha to hurt him and she got Sesshomaru, she didnt fight, so why is she so pissed she wants someone to want her she got that, and now she's pissed b/c she doesnt want him. -nods- i think she needs to get a lot of pay back and i kinda hope that the nephew chews her out b/c for one, she's hunting his beloved uncle, and 2 she's being a brat. I kinda hope shippo and Rin do as well. there's a lot of fics out there where they are all jsut happy to meet up againb ut she was very selfish with her leaving, not finishing the shard hunt, leaving shipp, miorku, and sango, all b/c she was having a hsisy fit that the most powerful youkai lord didn't spare her a second of his time, when she KNEW he was emotionally constipated. seriously for her to be so "active and selfless" as she presents herself she's being a real bish.
I kinda hope he makes her jealous by letting another hang on him or something. i dunno. part of me doesnt like this kagome. i hope they work out though.
more please!
*wiggles c0okies at you*
oh she's a total bish. seriosuly he was a lord of a land, and emotioanlly constipated. I really think he should ignore her but make it so she cant go anywhere. she really need to have someone set her straight. I kinda hope that he makes her as miserable as he's been for 500 years. she's very selfish. :[
helikesitheymikey! (Chapter 4) - Thu 12 Aug 2010
wonder when she's gonna get snippy and blame him for her never returning to the past...technically it IS his future self's fault for his past self's pain...just saying.
you would think that Fluffy would have read some dating/wooing books in the time she's been gone...baka.
anyway PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
wow, why didnt Sesshoamru jsut push her back through the well? other then that i'm totally amused by this, her moher though... WOW kinda shocked there. she's okay with a hanyou but not a youkai. she's kinda a hipocrit... oh well i cant wait to see more! - r0o *wiggles update bribery c0okies at you*
Darcy (Chapter 2) - Thu 12 Aug 2010
I'm soo happy that you decided to make this into a story!I can't wait to read more!
@_@ more please!
I'm so glad u decided to keep writing this story, I know it going to be a good 1
update again soon please!
roo86 (Chapter 1) - Thu 12 Aug 2010
More, more,more! Let your muse guide you, you have something here. This is way too good for a one-shot. I will be waiting.
wasn't expect another chapter but I'm not complaining hope your muse give more to look forward to
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