Sad story,  did you have to kill the children and ah un.  Jesss!!!!!  You redemption was at the end of the story. Clots of action, tragic evens and love!  Short and sweet like I liked them

Ok I just made it though chapter 2 and you had me in tears the entire time. Even now, I have fighting the knot in my throat. Very well written and very heart wrenching. You captured the rage that would have come with the loss of everything she loved, but you managed to keep the purity and love very evident through the end of the chapter.

*off to read the rest of it*

The story was amazing and I enjoyed it.

This was great....

THIS STORY MADE ME SAD BUT HAPPY!

oh my. that was a wonderful story and i loved it. you did a wonderful job and i enjoyed it!

I read all four chapters in one sitting, and it was really enjoyable! I am really impressed by how you managed to wrap everything up in four chapters, and still, manage to give the story a fantastic blend of emotions, depth and plot :) I am glad to see everyone got what they deserved - Sesshoumaru and Kagome, their happiness, and Naraku, his sorry end. Well done, r0o! Keep up the good work!

A very engrossing story. I could see the difference in writing styles between parts one thru three and part four. Well done...keep up the good work. btw I love your artwork also, you have great talent. Hugs and smiles :)

Great story! Definitely one of the best. I'm amazed that you wrapped this story up in 4 long chapters! Never was it boring at all ^_^

~Kukuro♥

YAY!! You finally finished this one. One by one, they're either being updated or finished slowly but surely. What a beautiful ending to such a tragic story where almost everyone is killed by that bastard Naraku. He definitely deserved what he got. Awesome job. Bravo!