Oh, dear me.  This isn't good at all!  Wait~ not the story!  The story is great!  It's Sesshomaru's behavior I'm talking about.  He is building up bad karma at an alarming rate, isn't he?  Bad things are gonna happen, and I can't wait!

man...I really hope he gets kicked or purified in the 'nads!

I REALLY hope he gets punished for this! by everyone! well...at least Midoriko and Kagome!

anyway he really is a nasty piece of work eh? and he has to BLACKMAIL the woman to get her to submit...somehow methinks that really doesn't say much about him as an alpha...has to threaten the life of a pup to get the woman to submit...he really didn't think this through did he?

anyway PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

I just had to add another review.  I give you a big pat on the back.  I read a story to enjoy it.  If I come across a mistake, I mentally correct it and keep reading.  Only an English professor could write a perfect sentence, but then would the reader be satisfied with a perfect sentence if it sounded so proper it was stiff with no life.  I'll take the mistake everytime if there's life in the word.  They do say the pen is mightier than the sword so keep swinging ink onto 'them thar' pages.

I don't believe he would be having this trouble with her if he had not approached her with anger in the beginning.  A soothing aura from the beginning would have worked wonders in relaxing her.  A seemingly friendly and sympathetic (Sesshoumaru style, of course) posture would also have helped to relax her into trusting him, thereby, negating all the problems he's having with her now.  I don't blame her for fighting him.  I would not like to be treated like that either.  She'll end up having to submit eventually and while her body may enjoy his touch, I bet mentally she'll resent and hate him.  I know I would.  I hope he's the first to discover love in their 'marriage' so he'll have to suffer knowing how she feels toward him because of the way he treated her.  I know, let the baby start to get sick from the separation so he'll have to let her nurse it and be near it.  I wish Kiyoushi had refused to nurse from another knowing they weren't it's mother.   

oh i like it. Naughty sesshoumaru is hot

*waits with baited breath*

thanks for updating so quickly <3

Hey, cool post.  Angreh Sessh is always fun!

Ouch.  Sesshoumaru can be so obtuse.  Everything is about what he wants - no thought for anyone else.  Grrr, I say purify the butt-head.

But really - great story.

Wow, awesome post! 

Since I don't really keep track of who writes what for the most part I wasn't aware that I'd reviewed 2 of your stories. I will write myself a note though saying that you don't care to improve your writing so not to point out anything you can do to improve your stories as far as correct word usage & such is concerned.

I'm happy that you updated so fast I'm loving this story very much and hope you will continue this and your other story "taken" despite the grammer nazi 

can't wait to see what sesshoumaru will now that he knows what the future is close to being

Great chapter I like Ryo :P Like how this story is going thanks for updating it so much lately!

and dont worry about the spelling and grammer nazis!

hello,

good job with your story.  It is sad that Kagome is having to deal with all this.  Hopefully sesshomaru will get his head together.  this story is well done. 

good job and update soon...

I like it overall but you have a few problems here & there, like it should be sought not seeked in the 1^st paragraph. In fact the whole sentence would read better as this; The month had sped by since he had found Kagome and he was no closer to the answers he sought now than he was then and the miko was stubbornly keeping him from the truth.

Just so you know what I fixed, you had her instead of he finding Kagome, seeked to sought & the 1st then to than.

Just so you know since you had then in both places, than is the common usage & unless it’s time related it should be than, than is ratio related, like comparing 2 things. Hopefully you’ll see what I mean about the 2 from the corrected sentence above.

More of this story please!! Love where the plot has gone so far.

seriously, inuyasha's last line made me cry..... kagomes is way too good for the world    

love your story, can't wait for more ;)

Oh wow.  That explains a lot.  I can see why Kagome is protecting the child - she's most likely afraid of what Sesshoumaru will do to the child.  Since it's father and mother were not his favorite people.  

I'm curious to see if a relationship develops between the two and how you bring it to be.  Right now, she's not being looked at in a good light.

Keep up the great work!

InuYasha's harsh words had to be only the icing on the cake for Kagome!  Obviously, she has been through the pain of InuYasha choosing Kikyo, seeing Kikyo pregnant with InuYasha's child, then almost dying when Kikyo did.  She has to suffer so much, and deserves none of it!  To me, this is way more in line with the anime and manga than the final episodes...  I can't wait to find out what happens next...

I want to say thank you for making Kagome strong and not some crying, whining idiot.  Great story thus far I can't wait to see where you take this!

OH, I have a feeling that Kiyoshi isn't biologically Kagome's... it was likely Inuyasha's and Kikyo's and that is what killed her...