sooooooooooo.... where's the rest of the story? D: and it was getting good, too! practically stayed up all night to read this only to come to an abrupt end! please! you have to come back! it was so good. i wanna know if sess comes to his damned senses and starts to COMMUNICATE with Kagome. honestly. that statue. even fountains talk more. (get it? cuz fountains gurgle/sp.... nvm). anyway! hopefully you return one day. it would be a shame for a story such as this to not have an ending. :(

i think i will love this line ferever: "fix this shit, sesshoumaru!" lol! yes! fix it, sess! bwahahaha!

*demands you update*

Wow!!!! I never would have expected that last bit about Kyoshi. I can't wait to see what happens next please update soon!!!

EEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeee......where is the next chapter ...I...I ...I can't find it...I was looking and looking but I just couldn't find it...... :)  There is a lot of angst in your story...and though I normaly loth angst, I can actruly stomach this, because a least I can see the hope int the future since they would have been force together if there hadn't been.  

That was mean what Inuyasha did to Sesshomaru...though I will admit that Sessy desurved to have that layed before his eyes......I can't help but think of his reaction in comparison to what it was the first time he saw it...though he had seen it while they where already dead, it is much more I don't know , heart renching?

And that is another question where is Akeno and Sesshomaru while all this is happening?  Did they desided they where gay and run off together?  Well that's a weird thought, *shiver*.  Any ways love the story, need more...bla bla bla...keep wrighting or else...bla, bla, bla, update soon....you get where I'm coming from?...XP  ....lol

Nyuka

I guess nothing motivates like anger and fear. That was a bit harsh but I guess with Sesshoumaru you need something extreme to get his attention. I wonder if he will be able to save them all. I wonder where he was during this whole massacre. Hopefully that was just a warning and not a true glimpse of what is to come. I can't wait to see what Sesshoumaru does now to protect his family :)

D: i think that your trying to make me crazy this is getting so dramariffic *wishes there was a bit more lovens*

Wat a cute way of ending the chapter. :D no agruing for once. lol. I can't wait until the next chapter!

so cute! i really liked this chapter! :3 i'm glad they had a good moment for once!

This was a sweet chapter in a very Kagome and Sesshoumaru kinda way. I like that they may have problems but they are tring to work it out in a way that works for them. I can't wait to see what happens as they continue to slowly chip away at the wall between them. I find it interesting that they are still intimate though (more at night away from prying eyes then during the day). I can't wait to see what happens next and when they'll all be able to go on a double date ;)

Sometimes it just helps to talk to someone about it. I guess they each just needed to get things off their chest and realize that there is still hope in the world. I wonder what will turn things around. I didn't realize how many children were involved in this. It seems he has a soft spot for children. I wonder if that can be extended to his wife and best friend. Well i guess that good things come to those who wait. and I can't wait to see what happens next :)

I love this story & I look forward to what will happen next. I really hope that Sessh & Akeno learn to appreciate what they have & seriously look at themselves,who they are,who they were,what they are becoming,how important the women in their lives are & what their lives would be like now without them. If they can't truly appreciate the chance they've been given with these 2 women I'd like to see both of them stuck in a dream where they had to watch the 2 women who love them decide that since it's obvious the men they love don't want them it's time they find men who will love & appreciate them...could you see the 2 of them having to watch other men love,appreciate ,care for ,give attention & make mad passionate love to  Kagome & Mayuri?? I bet they would snap. Especially if Sessh's dream included info into how if a male doesn't show his female how much he loves,appreciates,cares & needs her then he'll never be able to have pups with her ,cause as long as a female has doubt  or distrust in her heart ,that the male she loves doesn't  feel the same or just wants an heir or pup & then he'll kill her or leave her then she'll not conceive even if her body is in heat & that is how female youkai that rut with strangers during their heat avoid pregnancy & that it's some kind of internal safety net that maternal youkai have so they don't have to fear for themselves or their pups. I could see Sessh waking up in a panic,looking thru every scroll he has to see if it's true.It'd be even better if in his dream he had to relive every time he said something horrible to Kagome about how it's her fault that she's not getting pregnant,sending her to the healer for herbs & all along it was him that was keeping her from getting pregnant.It'd be even better if his 'inner beast' told him that he accepts Kagome but until Sessh's analytical half accepts Kagome & treats her as a true mate then his own beast will not allow fertile sperm into Kagome as his 'inner beast' doesn't trust him & would rather see him suffer with this & impotency with any other female for the rest of his life than see Sessh dishonor Kagome by giving her a pup without the treating her with the love,respect,kindness & honor one is supposed to treat a true mate & as long as Sessh treats Kagome like a servant or a plaything that he must dominate than he doesn't deserve his own pups.  

awe! this was such a sweet chapter! i love this!

A lot of madness going on. I wonder when everyone will get to see the light. You are doing a wonderful job describing the depth of their emotions. I just hope that they continue to make progress and make things better. I can't wait to see what happens next :)

mou everyone's upset and angry, hardly any happiness :[

I really love your story.  You have an excellent range and understanding of emotions in your story, it makes your character seem so very alive.  I simply can't get enough of this story.  I can't wait for the next chapter.

I only found this story today & read the entire thing non-stop. I love it & I hope you  continue it .I know it isn't always easy to write but this story has so much potential . When I get stuck writing I read my story over from the begininng & often I find things that I forgot I'd  slipped in at some point & I discover a way to find another track to go down & get a few chapters out of it.

This is one of those stories that has such an amazing amount of potential from so many different angles. While I was reading it now I was thinking of how after Takeshi(Sessh's dad) had taken a human woman & had Inuyasha &  Sessh mentioned that the people on the council when his father lead it,used to come to his dad for help or advice & at the time he'd thought they were his fathers friends but, when he needed assistance,they turned their backs on him & the one that had taken his dads place was the first to abandon & atttack him. First Sessh was trying to figure out what the council was doing just showing up here unannounced,why this ass & the council knew what was going on, not just inside his castle but,within the most personal & private parts with info regardings things that were in the midst of happening or beings that had been there just over a month, only for the ass on the council that had taken his Sire's position, had sent Izumi in as a spy & here she acted as if she cared about the pup & even appeared to be protective of it,when in reality she was ready fed him all the info on the pup & if Sessh hadn't been able to toss them(& her) out & counter their accusations as quickly as he had & they had taken the pup to had over to be killed,then the pups death would have been her doing as she was the one to give the ammo & location of the pup to them. It would seem that she'd not been sent there with the proper introductory information as to who she really was & when Sessh had asked her name & who she was ,all she said was “Izumi, my lord. I am one of the maids that the lord of the south sent' & at that time she was holding Kiyoshi & when Sessh asked what was wrong with the pup she said he hadn't been able to spend time with Kagome (since she was still weak from allowing Midoriko to use her body as a vessel to bring back Akeno) & at that time the pup growled at him & he at the pup & the pup produced a Miko barrier surprising both of them,as at the time they'd only thought he was an Inu hanyou & here he was actually an Inu Miko Hanyou. So,not only had she lied by not mentioning her relation to the Southern(?) ass but, had seen the pup display Miko powers. 

Thankfully her info wasn't accurate,as Kagome the human 'Miko' he'd supposedly Mated ,had turned out to be a rare,extinct race of Miko Youkai. It's a good thing that both Sessh & Kagome have beings on the council who'll defend & assist them in Norio & Kouga.

I can't help but wonder if the one who turned on his Dad & took his place on the council is responsible for the sudden, random attacks on villages in Sessh's lands or why there are no Ryu on the council or how the nobody else on the council has Seers or connections with any of the Ryu & appear to have no idea that the wars that are about to hit the lands are due to multiple actions,attitudes & events that the Kami's feel need to be rectified & changed or very shortly the war or wars that are coming will most likely wipe out all or most of both human & youkai alike. It's like there is this huge devastating picture hanging over all their heads & none of the 12 beings on the council are aware in the slightest.

I'm looking forward to seeing Sessh realize the only reason Kagome hasn't become pregnant is due to his holding back on his end of the mating bond. He's just realized he was still thinking of her as his half brothers wench & learning that not only has that been untrue but he's now aware of how Inu abused her,while she gave half her soul to the dead miko he loved & then took it in as her own. Now not only is she his Mate but she's never known another male intimately & she's his alone & will never know another,a rare,extinct Miko youkai with the ability to provide him with pups that will be more powerful than anything he'd ever imagined possible &  she's also a mother to 3 adopted pups & she gives them the love & care he wished he'd had & most youkai females are incapable of?

(I'm not sure if this was in the story) -Then there's Akeno who I'm not sure but didn't Midoriko(?) say that by getting over his pride,accepting the consequences of his actions & learning the lesson from losing his abilities that he might get them returned to him???

Learn how to spell and edit your story. You just have to put it in microsoft word and click the grammar and spelling button and it will show you whatever changes you need to make. Other than that good story so far

It's been awhile since this story was updated, but I'm glad you did update.  Although, I did have to go back to the beginning. But, I like the story very much. It does have way too many grammatical errors, however. But my biggest thing is: why don't you end a question with a question mark? I mean, obviously, I can see the question for what it is, but it's rather confusing when all the questions in a conversation ends with a period, instead of a question mark.  If this only occurred once or twice, I would ignore it, but, in this last chapter it occurred numerous times. And, the number of grammatical errors is starting to kind of ruin the story for me.  If it wasn't for the interesting storyline you have here, I would have stopped reading a long time ago.

yEy! I'm so glad you updated! i was wondering about you and this fic the other day i was going to come a pouncen!