I dare him to try and manipulate her.

Kagome rocks.She's 

all hot and stuff.I'm trying to ppuzzle out the tags though.

I really, really hope you're considering finishing this eventually. It's very compelling and well written.

I started off reading beside you in time, and found myself wandering for more. You weave your words so well, and turn simPle moments into something lovely. I am always ever patient with your updates. I'm interested to see what happens all around.

This is intense!  I can't wait to read more!  I'm curious to find out how the whole mess will pan out.

UGH! SO SWEET!! I love this story! I know that seems generic and I wish I was creative enough to think of another way to say it, but I love this story!

This chapter is quite sad to me. I feel so bad for Sess because he's trying to shield Kagome from a bad guy by being the bad guy. It hurts a little on the inside to think that he would feel such compassion and, dare I say, love to someone like her after all of the things he has gone through. I really hope he can come to his sense quickly and not ruin what could be there though.
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Alpine ^_^

ah! wait! he knows she's a cop!? did i miss/forget something!?

I love this story, it got me into AU's. Thank You!!! Hope to read more soon

he knows kags a cop??omg! this was a great look into sess feelings for kagome i loved it!an it was very romantic for him to sacrafice himself for her. updates have been slower but im still a follower of this story. as always cant with to see where you go with this.

Gaaahhhh~!  An update!  I was sooo excited to see this.  So Naraku has a hit man following Kagome around, eh?  I hope Sesshoumaru can find a way to do the right thing, here!  Can't wait for the next one.  Hope things clear up a little for you, RosieB!  Everyone needs a little time to play, right? ^_^

Update soon~!

gah! I love this story. This chpater was ery dramatic, and the banter that Sesshoumaru snaps back at Naraku is so entertaining and COMPLETELY in character. Can't wait to read more!

Dun Dun Dun!!!!!!!!!!!! When is he gonna find out about Kagome being with the po-po i really hope that doesn't ruin their relationship. 

'i love you, but i'm gonna hafta bring you in.' :P how dramatic!!!!

And the last of the groundwork has been laid, no? I just hope this won't be too painful nor full of doubts. *sigh*

this is awesome!! i'm not a alternative universe fan, usually, but this is on my top ten easy!!

Love it! cant wait for the next update!

I knew Naraku was going to drug him. And because he expected something to lower his defenses, he didn't feel it when the adrenaline blocked his ability to process. Ugh... And now those men that were standing with Naraku think that Sesshomaru's a user. >< I just hope that he could make a few of their faces and that they weren't anyone too important/high up (chief of police, senators, boxing officials, etc.). I wonder if Koga was up there?

Well, the shit's about two minutes from hitting the fan. Whatever it was that Sesshomaru agreed to to save Kagome had better have been worth his life and reputation.

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl

Wow that was intense. Absolutely brilliant as always :)

 I'm not sure whether I understood correctly, but was Sesshomaru's tag even working? It felt as if was going through the usual motions and didn't notice the added strength, seeing as his mind was somewhat elsewhere.

o0o0o0o0o0o i loved it!!!

NOOOOO!! What is he doing?! I know that Naraku has to be blackmailing him. Threatening to harm Kagome or something. Ugh... Please don't let Sessho take the wrap or get caught up in this~ *panics*

Do the tags have anything to do with the drugs? Are they being used to extract the demon's power ?

Great work !

I absolutely love the way you've incorporated the Shikon no Tama - it fits perfectly into the world you've created and it's true to the spirit of the original. Most of all, it's very, VERY intriguing! An awesome new twist!