These were sooo cute. I loved each and every one of them. I think you captured the emotions and humor in the stories wonderfully. I never thought about the fact that Sesshomaru is still so pale. Interesting thought. Maybe it has more to do with the fact that he is a big white dog. I think if Inuyasha were ever to be a dog he would probably look more like a white mutt with brown spots. What do you think?
Those were a very fun read...I doubt I could pick out a favorite if I tried, everything was well written and easy to read, well done!!
Fun drabbles! My fave was Rise. It would be nice to see a continuation of that one into a oneshot perhaps. Pale would be a second fave, but there were some missing words in the flow of the first line and a half. It made me a little confused at first.
Teana (Chapter 1) - Mon 09 Aug 2010
Very nice. I liked them. You managed to make a perfect story with each. I truely enjoyed reading them.
~Teana
I really enjoyed these drabbles. There were a couple that I found amusing, but the one I loved most of all was with Sesshomaru and Kagome sitting in the park and talking about old and new times. I would love to read more of your drabbles, so I'll be on the look out for them.
I loved the mental images this fic gave me: both Sesshoumaru the DJ and Sesshoumaru the waxwork were awesome ideas! I didn't really get the Cycle drabble, but the musing on Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru's differences was an interesting theme for a drabble.
Well done!
Hairann (Chapter 1) - Fri 06 Aug 2010
Very interesting drabbles, a few of which would be nice to see exstended :). I think my favorite was Wax, must be interesting to see yourself as a wax figure. Would make for a very fun read if you decided to turn that one into a longer story :).
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