To be honest, talking about what happened in Kagome's past at first seemed really boring to me. The first chapter was fine... then the second seemed kinda... like pushing it. Then the third... well, I skipped half of it n_n' but I love the end.
You should fix the grammar, though. Other than that, I am intrigued as to how the story will evolve...
*goes back to the reading*
taixi (Chapter 11) - Sun 11 Jul 2010
So many questions raised in this chapter - is her father still alive? if not, what happened to him during the past 8 yrs? how did Kagome work her way into becoming a lad-in-waiting? Is she out to kill others of the royal family (was Inu Taisho involved too, or was the order to kill her family solely a result of the Queen's private revenge/jealousy?) And finally, why would she keep the Queen alive for months when she could have done away with her earlier - information gathering purposes? setting up death scenarios for others of the family? Look forward to finding out the answers :)
I finally got to read this story too. I like where this is leading, and am curious to see how you develop the relationship between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. ESPECIALLY after what just happened. How does one fall in love with their parent's murderer....unless there is no love lost between parent and child?? Hmm, something to think about.
I look forward to the next installment!
TruGemini (Chapter 11) - Sat 10 Jul 2010
Hooray!!! We finally found out why the Higurashi family was slaughtered. Really, to slaughter a family because the guy denied your bed? How petty is that? And for Kagome to be the one to extract revenge, that was priceless. I loved the action and the calling card left later. Great Job!
Goose (Chapter 10) - Wed 07 Jul 2010
Amazing!! Read from 1 to 10 almost strait through (that thing called work got in the way D:) and yearning for more!!! I absolutely love the portrayal of kagome's father (please don't kill him off later in the story, I will cry!)! Keep up the great work and hoping for an update SOON! ^_^
And that is why it is not wise to cross Father Higurashi. I thought Kagome would have reacted different, but seeing as that she was never in this situation before, I can understand her reaction. She will probably learn from this and react better next time.
Ooh a nice, original story. For once I don't really have an inkling of where this story is going, thanks to the amount of originality. Keep up the good work.
Selah (Chapter 9) - Sun 04 Jul 2010
Ohhhhh YEAH!!!! Me thinks me found a new favorite story, yes, yes, yes. Adventure, Humor, Up's major down's, and love. Good recipe for my kind of story. Can't wait to read more.
0o0o0o0o0o0o0o i hope its that bitch izayoi and that Kagome rains hell fire on her little wagon!!! b/c she whoever she is, has caused a buttload of problems >:l stupid tart.
*wiggles update bribery c0okies at you*
Ruriame (Chapter 7) - Mon 28 Jun 2010
Dun dun dun. Haha. That was the first thing I thought when I read the last few lines about the poison. Thwat was a really interesting idea. You could've just had Kagome have the whole bout about Kouga and his proposal, but theyn things get more complicated with the poison incident. It made me remember that this is an assassin story.
O_O 0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o i really hope we get to see some of Sess' side soon, and i really hope that Kagome Ef's up that family except Sess... hopefully its Izayoi, and not Sessmomma, that way Sess wont be pissy when Kaogme murders her @_@ MORE PLEASE!
Ruriame (Chapter 6) - Thu 24 Jun 2010
Whoa. WHOA. There goes Kouga. Kagome's so DENSE. Hahaha. I wonder if she's going to kick his ass in the next chapter.
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>_>
<_<
well thats kinda counterproductive to being a SK....
THOUGH... i cant wait for her to freak out
this had me in fits giggling:
"What boys?!" She cried. "You just said that I am your boy."
"Yeaaah..you're my boy."
i love their relationship! though i wonder when Sess is gunna end up in the fic... we havent seen him once!
jojo661538 (Chapter 5) - Sun 20 Jun 2010
its a great story keep up the great work what did inutashio's queen tell him to betray his friend anyways i hope to read more soon ^_^
Ruriame (Chapter 5) - Sun 20 Jun 2010
So I see Kagome hasn't changed much from being a child. She's just grown into herself and is older and deadly with weapons instead of just her intellect. I'd like to see lots of her dynamics with the king's children. And I wonder what she'll talk about with daddy dear...
♥ it. Update soon~!!
her dad is awesome! seriously who tells you to give the prince 2 black eyes. >_> ROCKS! and His lil amazon! love it!
okay i forgot to add, though i'm really hoping that inupapa gets it coming to him. seriously he's EF'd up something aweful. best spymaster turning sides b/c you betrayed him... and his assassin prodigy girl-child @_@
one thing though, are they all human? i was jsut wondering.
-r0o
all this:
So i was gunna C&P all the parts that had me dying with laughter, but there was too much, Kagome as a child is AWESOMESAUCE! i love this, seriously had me laughing!
oh that's sad :l i hope this all works out! poor papa Higurashi!
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