Good story so far
Fantastic story. It's a shame it was never finished. If you should return, I hope that you pick it up where it left off! :)
Seriously I am in LOVE with your story!! I can't wait till the next chapter and I really like Kagome being an assassin!! Now I really can't wait as everyone would react if they found out :D
I love this story u have to tell ur readers how it ends
Please come back and finish this story!!!
Usually I don't give such long and drawn out reviews but, I have to say that your story is absolutely beautiful! You have such a great style of writing that I was drawn in the first sentence of the story. Your writing reminds me of a mixture of Tamora Pierce and Assassin's Creed; two of my many favorite things in the world. The way your story flows is absolutely amazing and I hope that you continue writing so that you can share your talent with many people.
I am very glad that your story is going sweet and slow. That's the way I like stories because it gives the author time to build their characters. I am very glad to be seeing this on Dokuga; you have such a great imagination! Keep up with your writing because you are positively a goddess with such an imagination.
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Woaaa.... nice xD update soon!
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i LOVE IT!! please keep going!!! ^_^
0o0o0o0o0o0o0o i cant wait to see what happens. when will we see things from papa's side? will he have regrets for the things he's done, or did, will he know who kagome is before she kills him, will she be able to kill him? more!!! *wiggles c0okies at you*
Wow, I absolutely love this story, I only came across it yesterday though. Still after reading a few chapters I just couldn't seemed to stop reading it, and I ended up pulling and all nighter to finish it. This is an amazing story, and I can't wait till your next update!!!~
YES, the plot thickens. Now he's ordering her to have dinner with him... oh yes, and Rin... but he wants her presence there. Ooo, I can't wait to see how this plays out. I noticed that she's starting to lose her cool... giving away her feelings through facial expressions. That has to be dangerous in her profession.
Lovely update. Can't wait to see how she prepares for dinner - will she actually be nervous about what she's going to wear..actually taking the time to look nice for him, or will she not really care and overly think about her appearance. And then the dinner itself - what verbal sparring will possibly take place. I imagine subtle barbs, here and there, that would go right over Rin's little head. Ah, but I digress.....
I await for the next chappie :)
0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i loves this! another wonderufl update!
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I got hungry......
I love it... I LOVE IT!!! Finally, a real encounter between Sessh and Kag!!! BUT PLEASEEEEEEEEEE update soon and and and... make it long :D THIS STORY IS SOOOOOOOOOO GOOD...
Sorry for not reviewing the last few chapters; I've been dead busy with exams and college.
Love you!!! Best of wishes for you :)
*-* I'll be waiting for the update...
Love it! Please continue updating! =D
tell you how much i just really LOVES this fic!!!
where's the chapter?? O_O!!!
So, she will have to make a court appearance eh? I can tell that she definitely has her work cut out for her. I wonder if Sess will recognize her>
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