okay FF's being evil so i'll review here.
I'm really rather pissed wit inuyasha right now, and i hope he relaly gets it when it coems down to it. I'm glad that kagome's not paying attention to him very much and i cant wait to see more from Sesshomaru and kagome as a couple.
Addy (Chapter 18) - Mon 09 Aug 2010
From chapter 18 on, it's blank... DDD: Is this posted anywhere else, or is my compter faulty?
Woah I dont like this development...Why did she say yes to Inuyasha?
I wonder how this will turn out.
Ambra (Chapter 26) - Fri 23 Jul 2010
You wrote that it would be a Sesshomaru-Kagome fic and I trusrt you. But whoa! I did not expect such plot evolution!!!
How will you go on? Another triangle between InuYasha, Kagome & Kikyo or something different?
Curious curious curious...
Keep going! ;)
Ruriame (Chapter 25) - Tue 20 Jul 2010
I knew she was going to take his request that way!
I just realized it was probably in this time period that people were so vague so Kagome's less than descriptive answers probably means nothing to Sango.
I also just realized that in this story, there's Mama Higurashi interaction and in AM, there was Papa Higurashi interaction. Nice parallels, once again. Like the night and day you mentioned before :)
Somehow, I really liked the interaction at the book place. It was really easy to picture and I found the atmosphere friendly.
The interaction with the three of them was cute. I feel like I'm just waiting for drama because I'm revved up for Sesshoumaru and InuYasha competition. And I totally forgot to mention that InuYasha and his ear thing is really interesting too! I like the comparison of how hiding them feel.
Ruriame (Chapter 24) - Tue 20 Jul 2010
For some reason, when I thought of Lady Red, I thought of AM. It must be because I just read it.
A pink frilly elephant. Definitely something I would find horrendous to picture. The poor elephant.
"Bonnie's mine, and I don't share!" Was that Bonnie speaking about Bankotsu?
"Well, maybe you should be." Ooooh, all mysterious.
I fell for it! Usually I don't, but I totally fell for it! Damn, I'm slow.
The last sentence was really interesting. Your stories are quite easy to jump back into even after long absences.
nice chapter, seeing the interactions between kagome,rin and sesshomaru :D
I love this story. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Ambra (Chapter 24) - Sun 11 Jul 2010
The more chapters I read, the more I truly like your story!
The misunderstanding between the two masked brothers was truly brilliant, though when the words "Unhand the lady." were said, a huge hint was given! ;)
A new romantic (and belonging to the romantic writing stream) writer to be! Congratulations...
Eve (Chapter 24) - Sat 10 Jul 2010
I just came across your story today and was so entranced by it I had to read it to its newest chapter. I can hardly wait until the next installment.!!
Thank You!
Finally, Sesshomaru's back in the picture! I've been waiting forever! Lol.
I think you have a wonderful story going on here! Good luck! I'll definately keep checking out for new chapters!
Loving the story so far! >.>
Just wish the chapters were longer... lols to satisfy more thoroughly between updates xD
Aha! YES! So, Sesshoumaru was so sneaky! Yay, I can't wait to see how things progress, but I see a bit of a triangle brewing with Kagome, Sesshoumaru and InuYasha. I can't wait for next Saturday's update!
Kali (Chapter 23) - Thu 08 Jul 2010
soooooo...are you not continuing this story..? i like it and im very ppicky soo yehh..
update soon~! I love this chap btw ^^
dayna (Chapter 23) - Sat 03 Jul 2010
Oh gosh such a wonderful story, i mean what can I really say...well first off let me say that this story is very well written and the story line is amazing. I love the way you incorporated your story into the time period you picked out. The language, the characters manners and such fit perfectly, I love it. I cant wait to see whats gonna happen when Sessy comes back into the pictuare, that should be very intertaining to say the least. I will definately be waiting for the next chapter.
This is such a great story.
The latest update was really good - and I am curious if Kagome is going to run into Sesshoumaru at the costume party... or will they run into each other later? And how will he feel about her saving Rin from drowning? How will he find out, because you figure nothing gets by the cold Lord.
I imagine that InuYasha will end up being her escort to the costume party...Sango and Miroku trying to hook them up? Someone is going to get hurt.
Ruriame (Chapter 22) - Mon 28 Jun 2010
You seem to have a talent with Kagome interactions with her parents, both in this story and AM. It was hilarious reading about Mama Higurashi and torrid romance novels. The last bit of conversation, particularly the end was very amusing. I liked some of the answers, like her "dedication to literature." Nice word choice. Haha. Definitely looking forward to what happens next!
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