Loved this chapter!!!! The concept of this story just keeps getting better and better. 

The fight between him and the lupin was awesome.

poor little guy, cant wait to see how he turns out. im guessing the draconians are ah and un?

I like kagomes place in the story. Their connection is so cute.

Never have I read a fic quite like this, it certainly is interesting.

I love this story. It's so unique and I just love a good Science Fiction. (that's the category I'm placing it in). You're story is really good and if you had the patience, you could make this into an actual book. Update soon!

An amazing read!!!!

this wwas good.

cant wait for more.

keep up the good work.

Your description of the technicalities needed are really good. Keep yourself up there in Iraq and take care. And keep up with the story please. It is quite good!

i cant really begin to tell you how very addicted i am to this fic! and the fact that even in such a situation as yourself that you continue to write for us! i think i adore you for that! - r0o

great chapter packed full on info.  poor ren!  take care out there!

it was soooooooooo good!

Very good. thanks for the update. cant wait for the next one

Boy this has bugged me the more I thought about it, what can you do if you're brain dead? This is going to leave me fretting until you manage to update again. I'm sure you'll probably explain it at some point, but until you do it'll bug me.

XO

Wow!  I loved this chapter, and I look forward to the next one, even though it probably won't be for a while!

wow what a powerful chapter. Thank you for the update

total wickedness. i love this story sooo fucking much!

please update as soon as you can!

0o0o0o0o god eery time you update this fic I'm always amazed at the story telling behind it!

wuh oh, looks like Sarge is in a world of hurt. I hope he's alright, and woo hoo Sessho's his normal self again lol. Thanks so much for updating this story, it's quickly becoming one of my favorites, i can't wait to see what happens next!

Well kinda squik there at the end. You have me wondering several things now with the name & description, I was wondering if he was Kiren's son & then I remembered about the no sex alteration you mentioned in the 1st chapter or 2 & then I wondered if he is Kiren himself somehow since I don't remember it saying exactly what happened to him in the end, so I'm not quite sure where this is going. I hope you manage to get back home fairly quickly, I'll miss this while you're gone.

loved it!

wow! this is such a mind-blowing story! i have been waiting for it feels like forever! im so HAPPY you updated i thought you'd forgotten all about your brilliant story!

please udpdate as soon as you possibly can ill be waiting with baited breath!