yay two updates from you on two awesome stories!!! I'm loving this one, and I can't wait to see where it goes. Two things though, i've noticed a lot that when your talking about them sitting, you use sat a lot where seated or sitting would better fit... for example "The two were sat under the tree"... should actually be "The two were seated under the tree". It's nothing major just something I noticed. And the other thing, persimmon was spelled permission. I'm awesome at doing stuff like that and I know it's an easy slip. But i just thought i'd tell ya! Anyway great job and I can't wait to see what happens next!!!
lmao :3 he LIKES bras!
Aaaww! I love your story. Sesshoumaru as a garderner is an interesting concept. And the Meiji era wasn't that long ago (relatively). I mean it started in like 1868! Hahaha sorry. History Major coming through. Thank you for updating!
I really do like this story and I'm so glad you updated! I really can't wait to see what else happens, keep up the great work!
Heartbreaking, but heartwarming all the same. You are doing an excellent job of character development in this story. And I like your characters. I like the story too. I also like wildflowers...
Because I care:
Sesshoumaru caught and held her in the protective embrace of [her] his arms, she mumbled her pain into his shirt.
Awww.... you wrote such a great visual in the train station. I went back through and reread from the start. I love this story and can't wait for more.
awe!!! heart!!! :3 yEy!
cute! >:3
No, he couldn't be more perfect. This is a very good tale, but I need you to put your personal life on hold and just write stories for me... Aimee, please, quit laughing so hard.
Anonymous (Chapter 10) - Sat 12 Feb 2011
AIIEEEE!!! So cute! I can't wait for more, this is absolutely adorable.
Awww this is an adorable little series you have going on! I can't wait to see what happens next!
X3 cute~
O_O wow
this is a cute story . . . I like it,
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