HA! I loved this chapter! The interaction between Sesshoumaru and Kagome was funny, and I am really looking forward to seeing more of it. I also find it funny that Kagome expressed annoyance with the *sniff* thing. I gotta say, it drives me a bit crazy imagining someone doing it in conversation while reading your story! I usually end up shaking my head at it. I have to say, I've kind of imagined Megumi as a Japanese Dame Judi Dench (in her grumpity role in Pride and Prejudice (http://img5.allocine.fr/acmedia/rsz/434/x/x/x/medias/nmedia/18/35/99/80/18871583.jpg) though obviously not in English Regency wear). I think I'm really enjoying this story because you write very fluidly. I can SEE the story as I read it. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Maddie (Chapter 12) - Tue 16 Dec 2008
great chapter. I don't think that I would like to get thrown in freezing cold water!!!! ^_^
Oh my dear you are very welcome! Yet again another enjoyable chapter. The interaction between Kagome and the village women is really interesting to me. You'd think they would treat even a miko in training highly, but they don't. I'm looking forward to more!
Maddie (Chapter 11) - Tue 16 Dec 2008
HMMM I think It's Inuyasha or maybe Sesshomaru. Great job on it ^_^
Oooh exciting! Miko boot camp! I can't wait to read more!
I'm glad you've written a Kagome who desires some amount of usefulness. I know there is a degree of 'canon-ness' needed for characters, but Kagome has always seemed so strong-willed and independent that I could never understand why she would never have had any actual training (other than, I suppose, narrative continuity in the series... it would have been an odd aside). I'm really looking forward to more.
I've only just started reading (and now have up to chapter 8), but this story is interesting so far. The plot keeps getting more and more exciting. Please update soon!
Maddie (Chapter 8) - Mon 15 Dec 2008
Awesome story I really like it can't wait for the next chapter ^_^
miko (Chapter 4) - Sun 10 Aug 2008
though the chapter was rather short, it's still pleasant and enjoyable to read, what will sesshoumaru do? and what about Kagome? i hope the answer will be posted soon, at least even the slightest clue... and million thank for your effort on this story, you really brighten up a day...
I can't wait for you to update! Good story so far. =)
Me (Chapter 2) - Fri 13 Jun 2008
There's no chapter two ._.;;
Kagome357 (Chapter 1) - Tue 10 Jun 2008
I really wanted to get into this story but I read where you were editing it so I was patiently waiting. Now that you're posting it over here, I know you're probably adding the edited chapters. I'll catch up but what I read so far, I really enjoy!
(Chapter 1) - Fri 23 May 2008
It's a pretty good story so far keep it up.
Koki (Chapter 1) - Thu 22 May 2008
Seems intriguing so far, hope you will update soon
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